Blood Red Rain: The Invasion-2014-11-11

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“A bloody internal rebellion has torn the Kingdom of Hawaii apart. Now, the new king and queen must rally their war-weary subjects to repel an invasion by the army of a powerful neighbor.”

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EXT. OCEAN OFF LEEWARD COAST – DAY #1#

Five very large TIGER SHARKS are tearing up and devouring a partially-submerged body of some sort.

The water is frothy and red with blood.

An underwater SPLASH is heard and several of the sharks break off their feeding and head toward the source of the sound.

EXT. LEEWARD COASTAL CLIFF – DAY #2#

The air is hot and still.

Flies buzz around a pile of bloated human bodies lying on sun-baked lava on the island of HAWAII. The limbs of the bodies have unnatural orientations relative to their trunks. A fly crawls out of a nostril of one of the bodies.

The lower halves of the bodies of TWO MEN dressed in loincloths (malo) are visible. They are throwing one human body after another off a 12 foot high rocky cliff and into the surging ocean.

One of the human bodies groans as he is picked up, but after one of the Men glances inland, he is dutifully tossed in anyway.

A SPLASH occurs as the body hits the water.

Several shark fins race toward the body as sea gulls quickly snatch pieces of meat from the surface.

EXT. LEEWARD COASTAL VILLAGE – DAY #3#

A young king, PONO (18) (POE-no), and his beautiful young queen, LANI (16) (LAW-knee), walk quickly past the smoldering ruins of a leeward coastal village. Lani is in front, setting the pace. They are followed by several ROYAL GUARDS. Everyone is sweating, dirty, and bloodied.

At the beach, the ocean is a shimmering peacock blue. A steep, pockmarked and rusty volcanic cliff blocks views of the mountains above. The air is hot and the land is arid.

The village is a collection of houses, each of which consists of a low rock wall upon which a wooden framework with a thatched covering rests. Many of the houses are burned down to the rock foundations.

FOUR MEN are peeling back banana leaves and removing a roast dog from an underground oven using two poles. Women and children gather around preparing for a meal.

Pono is handsome, athletic, and charismatic and is dressed in a loin cloth. He has a healing gash through an eyebrow. His black hair is long on the top and cascades down his back but is shaved on the sides. Lani is regal, lighter-skinned, and dressed in a skirt (pa’u). Her black hair is short.

WOUNDED WARRIORS prostrate themselves before their queen and look at Pono with great respect and admiration.

Pono’s eyes shows he is disgusted by what they see. Lani is saddened.

LANI

We can’t let this happen again.

PONO

Our advisors want me to sacrifice the rebel general to my war god tomorrow.

LANI

I’m so sorry, Pono. So many of your brothers ….

PONO

Brothers who wanted me dead!

As the couple continue on their mission, Lani has a worried look on her face.

EXT. REFUGE CAVE – LATER #4#

The refuge cave is a large lava tube. Its dusty entrance is concealed by a stone wall leaving a narrow passageway through which only one person can pass at a time.

As Pono and Lani quickly approach, perhaps a hundred ELDERLY MEN, WOMEN, and CHILDREN are stumbling one by one out of the cave entrance, sheltering their eyes from the sun.

PONO

The entrance wasn’t breached by the rebels.

A Woman carrying an INFANT that Pono and Lani recognize exits the cave entrance. The Infant has reddish brown hair (‘ehu). 

Pono and Lani rush up to the WOMAN who hands the Infant to LANI and then bows. Lani is crying in relief.

PONO

Thank the gods you are safe!

Lani holds the Infant closely, murmuring to him.

LANI

(to the Woman)

Let his father know he is all right.

Lani reluctantly hands the Infant back to the woman. The Woman bows and leaves with the Infant. Pono and Lani embrace, relieved.

EXT. LEEWARD BEACH – DAY #5#

The sun is beating down. A harsh, hot wind (the area’s infamous mumuku) blows down from the uplands.

Whale Hill Temple (heiau), a large pile of dusty, carefully-stacked, rust-colored rocks with a flat platform at its top, rises ominously on a hill in the background, just off the beach.

On the beach, Pono’s half brother (21), REBEL GENERAL, a large but bloodied and defeated man dressed in a ragged but still beautiful feathered cape and helmet, is marched by Royal Guards up to Pono.

PONO

(to Rebel General)

Sorry it had to end this way.

The Rebel General scowls.

PONO

(to Royal Guards)

Kill him. Do it quickly.

Rebel General is dragged over to a coconut palm tree and tied standing to it. He is not as brave now.

A loop of cord is placed around his neck and the ends of the cord are pulled on by TWO EXECUTIONERS choking the Rebel General until he slumps over dead.

PONO

I want his body sacrificed to my war god today.

The Two Executioners nod.

_EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE – LATER_ #6#

Rebel General’s body is sacrificed to Pono’s WAR GOD (Kuka`ilimoku) in an elaborate temple ceremony carried out by the PRIESTS.

The wooden War God has a large mouth with jagged teeth. It is carried into the temple by the Priests and placed on a stone altar at one end of the platform.

Rebel General’s naked body is washed, carried into the temple, scorched on the sacrificial fire, and placed on an elevated wooden structure.    

Pono, Lani and two of Pono’s other half-brothers, KANALOA (20) (CAN-ah-low-ah) and KEA (17) (KAY-ah) watch the sacrifice in royal regalia. Lani stands between Pono and Kanaloa, who obviously do not like one another.

Kanaloa has reddish brown hair.

Kea, a lighter-skinned little person, stands next to Pono and is dressed like the Hawaiian fighting (lua) expert he is, with his body shaved.

LANI

(aside to Pono)

You had to make an example.

PONO

The rebellion ends here…

PONO

(looks at Kanaloa)

as long as brother Kanaloa accepts my rule.

Kanaloa casts his eyes downward, but is not ashamed. Kea frowns at Kanaloa.

EXT. SOUTHERN FIELD SYSTEM – DAY #7#

Pono and Lani visit the Southern Field System, one of two large gardens that feed their people. The gardens are the jewels of their kingdom.

Thousands of FARMERS are tending breadfruit trees planted in grove that extends 20 miles along the coast.

Forest clearing work is just beginning on the higher elevation fields of the garden.

Pono hands are dirty. He picks up a handful of dirt, bringing it up to his nose to smell.

PONO

(to Lani)

This is what I enjoy.

LANI

(beaming)

Pono, I’m proud of you. You have a green thumb just like your grandfather.

Pono and Lani rub noses. Then, Pono wanders off to direct the Farmers.

PONO

(to one Farmer)

I know how we did it in the Northern Field System. But here I want the low walls between the fields to run up and down the slope. We want the walls to slow down the mist so that it will drip on our crops.

FARMER

Yes, Sire!

PONO

(to Lani)

By next summer, our food supply will be secure.

Pono smiles with satisfaction.

INT. MAUI KING’S COMPOUND – NIGHT #8#

MAUI KING (40) and MAUI KING’ SON (17) are sitting on adjacent mats in the men’s house in the light of flickering oil nut (kukui) candles.

They are drinking the intoxicant of the nobility (awa) from a cup. They are drowsy and their speech is slurred. The Maui King has dry, flaking, yellowed skin, and reddened eyes from long-term awa use.

Both are large men and have cruel faces. They are dressed in loin cloths.

MAUI KING

I am getting a lot of conflicting advice. What do YOU think, Son?

MAUI KING’S SON

We just don’t have the combination of rich soil and rain at the same place like Hawaii does. It’s time for us to take what we need.

MAUI KING

(smiling)

And I hear the Hawaii Queen is the most beautiful woman in the islands. You could use another wife, couldn’t you?

MAUI KING’S SON

(smiling back)

Yes, Father, I could.

Maui King nods and falls backward, asleep. His son stares at him with an intense look on his face and then falls asleep, too.

EXT. KONA BEACH – DAY #9#

From afar, Pono and Kea watch a group of three young SISTERS, one of which is Pono’s future SECOND WIFE (15), frolic naked in calm water that covers the lower halves of their bodies. Both Pono and Kea are washed and wearing a new loincloth.

Their chaperones, a group of OLDER WOMEN dressed in skirts, prepare bark cloth (tapa) on the beach.

PONO

So, one of these women is to be my political wife. Which sister should I choose?

KEA

Well, one beautiful wife is more than a handful. Remember our father’s problems. With so many beautiful women in his court, he could not think straight.

Kea playfully hits Pono on the upper arm. Pono winces, smiling.

KEA

I recommend the plain one.

PONO

They all look healthy, but I guess you’re right. My life is complicated enough as it is. I’ll see what she’s like.

Pono walks down to the surf and beckons his future Second Wife.

She smiles and motions for him to turn around and then runs up the Older Women. She puts on her skirt, approaches him and bows.

SECOND WIFE

Good morning, sire.

PONO

You and your sisters look like you’re having fun.

SECOND WIFE

We don’t want to be disrespectful, but after what we’ve all gone through, we needed a break.

PONO

I appreciated your father’s loyalty during the rebellion and would like our families to be closer.

SECOND WIFE

Your leadership made all the difference.

PONO

Umm, when I say our families, I mean you and I.

SECOND WIFE

It is my father who decides who I can become closer to.

PONO

Do I have your permission to ask him?

SECOND WIFE

You can ask.

PONO

Thank you. I will do that. Do you think, if he says yes, that you could love me?

SECOND WIFE

(smiling)

We will see.

PONO

I take your leave, then. I will talk to your father.

As Pono leaves, Second Wife turns toward her Sisters with a big smile on her face.

EXT. TRAIL TO WOMEN’S TEMPLE – DAY #10#

Pono walks uphill alone on a trail along a tumbling stream of reddish brown water. The terrain is dry at first, but becomes more verdant with altitude.

DUCKS feeding in pools along the stream take flight as he approaches.

Waterfalls along the upper trail create a cold mist that is carried downhill by a trade wind breeze.

Rainbows touch the ground as he approaches the only woman’s temple on the island.

The temple is a stone platform on top of a rock outcropping. Thatched houses are enclosed by a rock wall that surrounds the temple compound. 

The rainbows color the rain a blood red, giving the area a sacred aura.

EXT. WOMEN’S TEMPLE – DAY #11#

When Pono reaches the Women’s Temple, he waits while PONO’S MOTHER (40), an older woman in a while robe, finishes chanting to a group of ten YOUNG WOMEN dressed in skirts, pointing out the parts of a medicinal native plant.

As she finished her lesson, she sees him approach and walks over to greet him with a hug. They wander away from the group.

PONO’S MOTHER

How are you?

PONO

I’m fine, Mother. We are making great progress in expanding the gardens.

PONO

How are you feeling?

PONO’S MOTHER

I am doing well for an old teacher.

PONO

We all appreciate your training our nurses.

Pono’s mother smiles.

PONO

I need some advice.

PONO’S MOTHER

About what?

PONO

I need to take the daughter of a Kona chief as a second wife. How should I tell Lani?

PONO’S MOTHER

Gently. She loves you and will understand the politics involved.

Pono and Pono’s Mother hug.

PONO

I’ll let you know how it goes.

_INT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – NIGHT_ #12#

Before they part to eat the evening meal, Pono in the men’s house (hale mua) and Lani in the women’s house (hale aina), Pono and Lani embrace and talk.

PONO

You understand, don’t you?

LANI

I understand you want to take a second wife.

PONO

Yes, but only to assure the loyalty of the Kona chiefs.

LANI

Are you sure that’s your only reason?

PONO

Really, it is.

LANI

You’re not still upset that you and I can’t have children?

PONO

No. Your and Kanaloa’s sons are my sons. You know that.

Lani frowns before they rub noses and walk toward their separate eating houses.

EXT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – LATER #13#

Pono and Lani meet after dinner and walk hand in hand to their family living house (hale noho). The family living house has a rock wall border and a thatched roof. Its floor is covered with many layers of tapa mats.

LANI

Do you want to have children with your second wife?

PONO

If you are asking if I will sleep with her some nights, I think you know that will happen.

LANI

I understand why this is necessary but I don’t like that part.

PONO

(smiling)

I’ll try to keep it to a minimum.

LANI

You had better.

They snuggle.

LANI’S DREAM SEQUENCE

EXT. KONA REEF – DAY #14#

It is a dark and stormy day. A Kona wind from the southwest is howling as giant waves break on the reef.

The young woman who will become Lani’s SPANISH GRANDMOTHER (20) drags herself up on the beach as the remains of a shipwrecked Spanish Galleon are torn apart offshore of Hawaii island.

Nearby, a SPANISH MAN (24) struggles in the surf. Lani’s Spanish Grandmother pushes herself up on her feet and runs over to the Spanish Man and kneels and prays.

SPANISH GRANDMOTHER

Virgin Mary, thank you for saving my brother!

The Spanish Man weakly smiles.

EXT. KONA COAST – DAY #15#

A YOUNG LANI (4) and a YOUNG KEA (5), both obviously of Spanish decent, are watched by their beautiful OLDER SPANISH GRANDMOTHER (50) while they play. Young Kea adores Young Lani, but gets a little rough.

YOUNG LANI

Ouch!

OLDER SPANISH GRANDMOTHER

Kea, you be nice. I want you to protect Lani.

YOUNG KEA

I will, Grandmother.

OLDER SPANISH GRANDMOTHER

I know you will.

END OF DREAM SEQUENCE

INT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – LATER #16#

Lani awakens from her dream. She is worried.

LANI

(mumbling)

Grandmother (Tutu)! Protect us all!

EXT. MAUI KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #17#

Kanaloa meets in secret with Maui King, who is in the process of having his GUARDS break the leg and arm bones of a captured ENEMY CHIEF. Each limb is held by two Guards on a wooden fixture and a third Guard hits it with a large club, breaking the bone as the Enemy Chief screams.

KANALOA

(transfixed by the captive’s pain)

Sire. It only makes sense that you should rule both Hawaii and Maui.

MAUI KING

I am glad you understand that we can all be one happy family.

KANALOA

(looking away from the spectacle)

So, it’s agreed. You will appoint me reagent of Hawaii island if I help you get rid of Pono.

MAUI KING

(wryly to the captive)

Your pain is my pain.

MAUI KING

(to Kanaloa)

That’s our agreement.

Kanaloa shudders and takes his leave.

INT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #18#

Pono’s step co-fathers (retainers/relatives who raised him), FIRST FATHER (55) and SECOND FATHER (53), enter. First Father is dignified and his white hair extends to his waist. Second Father is more playful.

Pono hugs First Father.

PONO

Welcome, father.

Then he hugs Second Father.

PONO

Welcome, father.

PONO

(to both of them)

How are you? How is Auntie?

SECOND FATHER

I am doing well, as is my brother here. Our wife still thinks she is in charge.

Pono smiles.

FIRST FATHER

(now more serious)

We hear that Maui is jealous of your field systems.

PONO

I have heard the rumors, too. Kea and I have been talking about paying Maui a visit. If they have mischief on their minds, maybe we can outsmart them.

FIRST FATHER

True, a king must be smart. But, as you know, war always has unintended consequences.

PONO

Thank you, father. We will be careful.

They rub noses and part.

EXT. MAUI PLAIN – DAY #19#

The Maui King and his MAUI GENERAL sit on a dias viewing a mock battle. There are about four thousand warriors in each “army.”

Both of the armies are arrayed in standard Hawaiian battle formations.

Out front are skirmishers (huna lewa) carrying javelins (ihe). They are backed by a larger body (huna paa).

Behind these come groups of perhaps a thousand veteran warriors each (waa kaua).

Last come the mass of the rank-and-file soldiery (poe kaua).

In their midst stand the army’s leaders in feathered capes surrounded by their friends and images of their gods. They are encircled by a royal bodyguard (papa-kaua) armed with pololu spears.

The armies charge toward one another yelling at the tops of their lungs.

MEMBERS OF THE MAUI KING’S COURT look on from the sidelines, one of which is a HAWAII SPY.

MAUI KING

Our army looks prepared.

MAUI GENERAL

Sire, we are ready to invade Hawaii whenever you wish.

MAUI KING

How many warriors can we transport across the channel?

MAUI GENERAL

We have enough canoes to transport about 20,000.

MAUI KING

I will consult with my priests to select the best time.

The Hawaii Spy surreptitiously backs away from the group and heads toward the beach.

EXT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #20#

Kea is listening to Hawaii Spy on the beach. He runs up to Pono with news.

KEA

Pono!

PONO

What do you need, bruddah?

Kea talks softly to Pono.

KEA

The rumors are true. Maui is preparing to invade. They think the rebellion has weakened us and want to capture our field systems. They don’t know we know about their plans.

PONO

Let’s visit Maui and get the lay of the land.

KEA

I’m with you.

PONO

I have a plan, too. I want them to think that we really are weak and that you and I are not getting along.

KEA

(smiling)

That should be easy.

PONO

Don’t tell anyone else, especially bruddah Kanaloa.

KEA

Got it.

The pair walk off together.

EXT. CHANNEL BETWEEN HAWAII AND MAUI – DAY #21#

Pono and Kea set out to visit the Maui King in a double-hulled canoe paddled by twelve GOURD HELMETED PADDLERS. They all dressed in loin cloths and Pono and Kea wear colorful (yellow and red) feathered capes and helmets. Pono’s royal standard (kahili) flies over the canoe.

As the canoe approaches the beach, Pono sees the Maui King.

PONO

(to Kea)

There he is. Follow my lead.

The canoe rides a wave up onto the beach and is secured by Gourd Helmeted Paddlers.

INT. MAUI KING’S COURT – DAY #22#

Maui King sits on a wooden throne. Flanking him are the members of his court, including MAUI PRIME MINISTER, MAUI GENERAL, MAUI HIGH PRIEST, MAUI RETAINER, and a throng of HANGERS-ON.

As Pono and and Kea approach the court, they see a COMMONER (20) prostrating himself before the Maui King. 

COMMONER

My king, I apologize for casting my shadow on you. I could not avoid it.

MAUI KING

(to Retainer)

Take him away and kill him.

Retainer hauls Commoner off.

Maui King turns to greet Pono and Kea.

MAUI KING

Welcome, Cousin! How is Lani?

PONO

She’s fine. I heard the surf was kicking up over here.

MAUI KING

It is. Let’s get some surfing in before lunch.

The two grab their surf boards and head for the surf.

EXT. OFF MAUI COAST – LATER #23#

Pono and Maui King are sitting on their boards waiting for a wave.

MAUI KING

I was surprised to hear about the commotion in your kingdom.

PONO

It was a very destructive rebellion. We lost a lot of good people, especially along the Kona coast.

MAUI KING

I assume the situation is under control now.

PONO

Pretty much. It’ll be a while before parts of the Kona coast are resettled.

MAUI KING

How did your side fare?

PONO

Pretty well. To tell you the truth, though, Kea was participated in some unbelievably violent battles. He’s still not thinking very straight.

A big wave moves through. They both try for it. Pono lets Maui King catch the wave.

_EXT. MAUI BEACH – LATER_ #24#

After surfing, Pono and Maui King sit down to lunch. They are joined by Kea and MAUI GENERAL (20), Maui King’s top general.

Pono pretends that Kea is in trouble for being late cooking Pono’s lunch.

PONO

(to Kea)

Where’s my lunch? I’m famished.

Kea pretends like he is ashamed.

KEA

It is not ready my king.

Pono frowns and slaps Kea’s face, causing Kea to wince, and giving Maui King the impression that Kea and he are at odds.

KEA

(through his teeth)

I apologize. It won’t happen again.

Kea quickly cooks the lunch and feeds Pono.

MAUI KING

That was quick. I’m impressed. Maybe you should work for me.

PONO

He’s my right hand man.

MAUI KING

I see.

Maui King winks at his Maui General.

EXT. MAUI BEACH – LATER #25#

Kea and Maui General wander off down the beach. They trade barbs. The Maui General, who is a giant, berates Kea.

MAUI GENERAL

How did a little guy like you become a general?

Kea does not mention his skills and accomplishments.

KEA

Pono is my brother. How did you become a general?

MAUI GENERAL

I earned my position in battle.

Pono calls from the canoe.

PONO

(to Kea)

Time to go home.

Kea heads for the canoe.

EXT. CHANNEL BETWEEN MAUI AND HAWAII – DAY #26#

In their canoe, Pono and Kea strategize about their Maui visit on the way back to Hawaii.

PONO

I think that went well.

Kea rubs his cheek.

KEA

Maybe for you.

PONO

Oh, did I hurt my baby bruddah?

Kea splashes Pono with seawater playfully.

PONO

They think we are weak and at odds with one another. Good. Now we have to execute the rest of the plan.

The Gourd Helmeted Paddlers continue paddling.

EXT. KONA COAST #27#

Pono arrives in a coastal village to arrange to marry a daughter of a powerful KONA CHIEF.

KONA CHIEF

Welcome, my king.

PONO

I come to ask for the hand of your oldest daughter in marriage.

KONA CHIEF

What will I get in return?

Pono points to a double canoe that is full of tribute.

PONO

The canoe and its contents are yours. There is more to come.

Kona Chief smiles and nods.

KONA CHIEF

How will your children be ranked? I understand the first son of Lani and Kanaloa is destined for the throne.

PONO

I am my father’s highest ranking son. Your family is highly ranked, too. Who knows what will happen.

Pono winks.

Kona Chief laughs.

INT. WAIMEA – NIGHT #28#

A cold, horizontal, misty rain (kipu’upu’u) is driven through the village by trade wind gusts. The moon and stars are visible above the tree tops through breaks in the rapidly moving clouds.

Kanaloa meets in secret with SUPPORTER NO. 1 and SUPPORTER NO. 2 in a dark house lit by a candlenut lamp.

KANALOA

I’ve been assured that we will be in charge after the Maui invasion.

SUPPORTER NO. 1

When will the invasion happen?

KANALOA

Soon.

SUPPORTER NO. 2

I’m really looking forward to seeing your brother dead.

EXT. KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #29#

Pono and Second Wife are married in a festive ceremony.

Pono, Second Wife, Kona Chief, and Kona Chief’s Wife sit on a dias surrounded by hundreds of ONLOOKERS. Loli presents Kona Chief with tribute: roasted pigs and dogs, containers of poi, sweet potatoes, and sugar cane.

KONA CHIEF’S RETAINERS present Pono with similar gifts.

A troop of WOMAN HULA DANCERS entertain the crowd.

BOXERS also entertain the crowd.

Everyone feasts and celebrates the marriage.

INT. MAUI KING’S COURT – DAY #30#

Maui King orders his MAUI KING’S SON to reconnoiter Hawaii island coast to assess defenses.

Maui King’s Son is flirting with a woman in the court.

MAUI KING

Son, I have something I want you to do.

MAUI KING’S SON

What is it, father?

MAUI KING

I want you to reconnoiter the Kona coast to see what sort of defenses they have.

MAUI KING’S SON

At your command.

Maui King’s Son exits.

INT. ROYAL HOUSE OF IMPURITY – NIGHT #31#

Lani and Second Wife have begun having their period at the same time each month. Because women are considered contaminated by their menses, they end up in the royal compound’s house of impurity (hale pe’a) at the same time. Second Wife walks up to the door and sees Lani within.

SECOND WIFE

Pardon me, Your Majesty. It’s my time and I must stay here a while, too.

LANI

Come in. Hopefully, we won’t be here

long.

SECOND WIFE

Thank you.

Second Wife enters with her head down and places her personal items on the sleeping space against the back wall of the house. The sleeping space is covered with fine dried vines over pebbles. On top, fine soft mats make of flexible pandanus leaf are laid.

LANI

Sit with me.

Second Wife sits facing Lani. PONO’S NIECE brings the pair food.

LANI

(to Pono’s Niece)

Thank you, cousin.

LANI

(to Second Wife)

You may have heard all this, but I want to make sure.

Second Wife nods.

LANI

Pono and I have not been able to have children. The sire of my two sons is his brother, Kanaloa. Because Pono’s father decreed that the throne follow my father’s bloodline, my oldest son will be king some day, even though Pono has a higher birth rank than Kanaloa.

Second Wife nods.

LANI

Although he won’t admit it, I think Pono would still like to have children of his own. That’s where you come in.

SECOND WIFE

I understand. I will give him children and they will serve the rightful king.

LANI

Good. Now that we have that settled, let’s get some sleep.

Both women rise and walk to the sleeping space. They lie with there feet toward the back wall, with their heads inward. Second Wife smiles to herself.

_EXT. KONA COAST – DAY_ #32#

A CROWD is milling around a ceremonial white tent.

Pono and his SECOND WIFE enter the tent where Pono is supposed to impregnate her.

Outside the tent, Pono’s Mother prays for the union. She glances at Lani.

It is clear Lani does not like the idea.

Pono and Second Wife enter the tent.

EXT. HAWAII KONA COASTAL VILLAGE – LATER #33#

Pono decides to move Kona villagers away from the coast and into the upland field systems.

Pono’s Second Wife, who lives there, explains to VILLAGERS why it is necessary.

PONO

(to Second Wife)

All the coastal villagers must move up into the field system for their safety.

SECOND WIFE

(to Villagers)

The Maui army is coming. All of you must live in the field system for a while.

Villagers begin to pack their belongings for the journey upland.

EXT. HAWAII KONA COAST – DAY #34#

Maui King’s Son and RUNNER visit the Hawaii Kona coast.

MAUI KING’S SON

Take the King’s trail until you reach Kealakakua Bay and then return. Be on the lookout for warriors.

Runner nods and takes off running to the south and Maui King’s Son takes off walking to the north.

EXT. HAWAII KONA COAST – LATER #35#

Runner comes upon the same three Sisters bathing in the ocean. He sees them and they do not see him. He is enthralled.

Sister No. 2 runs naked up the beach to get a drink of water. She spots Runner and beckons to him.

Amidst CAT CALLS from the other Sisters, Sister No. 2 takes Runner’s hand and they disappear into the bushes.

EXT. HAWAII KONA COAST – EVENING #36#

Maui King’s Son and Runner met back at their canoe.

MAUI KING’S SON

I did not see anyone along the coast.

RUNNER

(looking down)

Neither did I. The villages I came across are burned and empty.

MAUI KING’S SON

We had heard the rebellion was a bloody one, but we had no idea it was this bad. Let’s get back.

They launch their canoe and paddle toward Maui.

_EXT. MAUI KING’S COURT – DAY_ #37#

Maui King’s Son reports back to Maui King who is in the presence of his ADVISORS.

MAUI KING’S SON

Father, the Kona and Kohala coasts are deserted.

MAUI KING

So, the rumors are true. Maybe this is the opportunity we have been waiting for.

MAUI KING’S SON

There will be no resistance when we land.

MAUI KING

We will need fewer warriors to prevail than I originally thought.

MAUI KING

(to his advisors)

What say you?

All of his advisors save one, look down. One, MAUI KING’S ADVISOR, steps forward.

MAUI KING’S ADVISOR

Your majesty, this is not the time to invade. Please wait for a more auspicious time.

MAUI KING

How dare you contradict me? I will have you burned alive when we return victorious.

Maui King’s Advisor is respectful but does not appear to be worried about his future.

EXT. KEALAKAKUA BAY – DAY #38#

Pono convenes a war counsel.

LOLI

The invasion is on, probably next week.

PONO

(to Kea)

Will our troops be ready?

KEA

We are training hard. Yes, we will be ready.

PONO

Get going and keep at it. Loli and Hauna, I have some things I want you to arrange.

Kea leaves the meeting.

EXT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #39#

Lani and the Second Wife practice throwing stones with a sling.

LANI

No! That is not the way I showed you. This is hopeless.

SECOND WIFE

You are a terrible teacher.

LANI

(under her breath)

Pretty, but dumb.

Second wife comes out swinging and nails Lani, who staggers to the ground.

EXT. TRAIL TO HOKU’ULA -DAY #40#

Loli make defense arrangements with LEADER of a village of OUTCASTS (kauwa). OUTCASTS all have a cross (+) or chevron (^)tattooed on their foreheads.

LEADER

You want us to do what?

LOLI

Your people are good at it.

LEADER

Why will they come through our village?

LOLI

You let me worry about that.

LEADER

What will we get in return?

LOLI

All the food you can carry.

Leader nods.

EXT. KAU – DAY #41#

HAWAII WARRIORS are practicing Hawaiian fighting (lua) moves at a lua school (pa lua) which is laid out in the traditional manner.

A central thatched building (hale kumu ka ‘aha) is surrounded by a low stone wall (pa) that has only one entrance that is guarded.

Kea is the lua master (‘olohe lua) of this lua school and stands next to the school’s altar (kuahu). The altar is decorated with the seven plants traditionally used.

All the hair has been removed from the warriors’ bodies and their bodies are covered with the candlenut (kukui) oil to make them difficult for an adversary to grip.

EXT. LAE LAE – DAY #42#

Hauna makes defense arrangements with the goddess, WAO (pronounced Wow) who lives on the hill called Lae Lae. The goddess (20) is beautiful and has long black hair that hangs to the ground. She is accompanied by human retainers that look a little like rocks.

WAO

Hauna, good to see you!

HAUNA

You are as beautiful as ever.

WAO

What brings you to my forest?

HAUNA

Pono needs your help in defending his kingdom.

WAO

How can I help?

Hauna speaks with Wao pointing to the trail coming up from the coast, but their conversation is inaudible.

_EXT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – DAY_ #43#

Pono rallies his TROOPS with a great speech (again, like in the previous film, but better).

PONO

My family, you know what’s at stake here. If Maui prevails, your children will be hungry again. Your homes will be burned and your families will be taken as slaves. But we can once again beat the odds. Follow me into battle and you will remember this time with pride when you are old and gray.

The Troops cheer.

This is the midpoint of Act II, when everything appears to be going Pono’s way.

EXT. WAIMEA UPLANDS – MORNING #44#

Kanaloa is awaken by villagers who point to the channel between Maui and Hawaii.

VILLAGER

My chief, the channel is black with canoes.

KANALOA

The invasion is upon us.

Kanaloa slowly smiles.

_EXT. KAWAIHAE BEACH – DAY_ #45#

As the Maui canoes land, Hauna and Loli prostrate themselves before Maui King who is surrounded by his WARRIORS.

HAUNA

We have heard rumors of your coming. Thank the gods they were true.

LOLI

Your wisdom is much needed here. Our king and queen are too young.

MAUI KING

It is good to see that you people appreciate what we are doing. Where is a good location for the battle?

HAUNA

If you take a position on the top of the hill above Waimea called Hoku’ula, you will be victorious. There are plenty of stones for your slings.

MAUI KING

We will see. If you are lying, I will have every bone in your body broken.

Hauna and Loli bow and Maui King signals his Warriors to move upslope.

EXT. WAIMEA UPLANDS – DAY #46#

Kanaloa organizes a small band of villagers to hurry down to the coast under a flag of truce.

KANALOA

You. I need an escort down to the coast to meet with the Maui King.

VILLAGER TWO

Are you sure that is a good idea?

KANALOA

Yes, I am. And no need to tell Pono’s Mother about this.

They leave for the coast.

EXT. HILL ON THE WAY TO THE COAST – DAY #47#

Kanaloa approaches Maui King who is protected by his ROYAL GUARDS.

KANALOA

Welcome, my king.

MAUI KING

(gesturing to his Royal Guards)

There has been a change of plans.

Royal Guards grab Kanaloa.

MAUI KING

(to Kanaloa)

You have seen too much.

MAUI KING

(to his Royal Guards)

Take care of that.

KANALOA

What do you mean?

Kanaloa’s eyes are burned out.

EXT. HILL ON THE WAY TO THE COAST – LATER #48#

A blinded Kanaloa is held down by Royal Guards, his head is bashed in, and his body is washed.

EXT. KOHALA TEMPLE – DAY #49#

Kanaloa’s body is then sacrificed on a temple alter to the war god of Maui King.  

EXT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #50#

Lani hears of her first husband’s death. She is devastated. She is consoled by Pono and Second Wife.

KEA

We hear he charged down to the coast in a delaying action.

SECOND WIFE

(to Lani)

I’m so sorry. He must have been a very brave man.

PONO

(frowning)

This was not part of our plan.

They help Lani to her bed.

EXT. TRAIL TO HOKU’ULA – LATER #51#

Maui King and Maui King’s Son find themselves and his VANGUARD in a village. Outcasts, that are considered unclean, step out of the shadows. The Army stops in its tracks.

MAUI KING

Those are outcasts. We are defiled. How did this happen?

MAUI KING’S SON

I’m sorry, father. I was just following the trail.

MAUI GENERAL

Get the Priest up here. We need him to perform a cleansing ceremony.

EXT. TRAIL TO HOKU’ULA -LATER #52#

A cleansing ceremony is performed by PRIEST.

EXT. TRAIL TO HOKU’ULA – LATER #53#

As the Maui Warriors continue their march up the trail, boulders begin rolling down the hill called Lae Lae, crushing some of them.

When the boulders come to rest, they turn into Wao’s servants and run back up the hill under the gaze of Wao.

WAO

Great job, my people!

EXT. WOMAN’S TEMPLE – DAY #54#

Maui forces come upon a temple (called Haleino) run by Pono’s Mother which is staffed by virgins. Raping and pillaging ensues. When Pono’s Mother, again in the white robe, tries to intercede, she is struck down.

It is raining of course, blood red rain.

EXT. UPLAND PLAIN – DAY #55#

Pono and Kea are meeting with HAWAII CHIEFS preparing for battle when a HAWAII RUNNER approaches and bows deeply.

HAWAII RUNNER

Sire, I have bad news. Your mother

was not warned of the approach of

the Maui army. Her temple was

overrun.

Pono looks at Kea, whose eyes are downcast.

PONO

(to Hawaii Runner)

How did it happen?

HAWAII RUNNER

She was not told of the approach of the Maui army.

PONO

What’s happened to my mother?

HAWAII RUNNER

She is wounded. Her students were

killed or worse and her temple is

being used as a Maui headquarters.

Hawaii Runner kneels, hoping the Pono will not kill the messenger.

PONO

(to Kea)

We’ve got to get her out of there!

KEA

We’d better hurry. The pigs will

start foraging at sunset.

Pono, Kea, and a small contingent of warriors hurriedly head out for the temple.

EXT. WOMEN’S TEMPLE – NIGHT #56#

The scene is bathed in dim moonlight. Thin clouds move by, pushed by the wind.

MOANS and SCREAMS are heard as the rescue party approaches.

KEA

The pigs are feeding on the dead

and wounded.

PONO

We’ve got to get closer.

Suddenly, a large group of Maui Warriors appears and begins to bed down for the night.

A blood curdling SCREAM is heard as the rescue party is prevented from moving forward.

PONO

That’s my mother!

After a minute, the screaming stops.

KEA

I’m sorry, Pono. We tried.

PONO

Tomorrow, I will have my revenge.

This is the Second Act turning point.

EXT. HOKU’ULA – DAY #57#

Trudging up the mountainside, Maui forces spot a muscular man who is leaping hundreds of yards from outcropping to outcropping. He cannot be a mere mortal.

He lands close to some of them and introduces himself.

OLD MAN

Aloha. I am Old Man. This is my mountain. What are you doing here?

WARRIOR

We are moving into position before the battle starts.

OLD MAN

Who is fighting?

WARRIOR

Maui is invading Hawaii.

OLD MAN

Oh. That again. Well, try not to make a mess.

The Old Man leaps.

_EXT. HOKU’ULA – EVENING_ #58#

Maui forces are in position on the top of Hoku’ula.

It is a spectacular sight.

The red and gold feather capes of the nobles echo the red and gold blossoms of the ohia trees that line the gulches cut in the mountainside.

Many of the common soldiers shiver in the cold, misty wind for which the area is now famous (rain which raises goosebumps, ki pu’u pu’u).

EXT. HOKU’ULA – LATER #59#

Two warriors are looking for sling stones to add to the limited arsenals they brought from Maui.

MAUI WARRIOR #1

Have you found any good sling stones?

MAUI WARRIOR #2

The rock up here is too soft. I have a bad feeling about this place.

EXT. WAIMEA PLAIN – NIGHT #60#

Torches held by Pono’s warriors are seen by Maui forces spreading out on the plain below Hoku’ula.

_EXT. HOKU’ULA – MORNING_ #61#

When the sun rises, the Maui King sees Pono’s forces arrayed before them for miles. The Maui forces are outnumbered. The Maui King turns to his son.

MAUI KING

How could this happen? You said the villages were empty?

Son casts down his eyes.

EXT. WAIMEA PLAIN – DAY #62#

In accordance with custom, Pono and Kea approach Maui King and Maui General under a flag of truce (a ti leaf on a pole) to negotiate the place and time of battle.

PONO

I suggest we fight here and now.

MAUI KING

Let’s have our generals fight first.

Pono looks at Kea, who nods.

PONO

It is agreed.

The parties return to their ranks.

_EXT. WAIMEA PLAIN – LATER_ #63#

Kea and the Maui General, their bodies shaved and oiled, approach one another and fight. Kea is wounded. Just before the Maui General kills him, Kea recovers and kills the Maui General.

_EXT. WAIMEA PLAIN – LATER_ #64#

Both of the armies are arrayed in standard Hawaiian battle formations.

Out front are skirmishers (huna lewa) carrying javelins (ihe). They are backed by a larger body (huna paa).

Behind these come groups of perhaps a thousand veteran warriors each (waa kaua).

Last come the mass of the rank-and-file soldiery (poe kaua).

In their midst stand Pono, Lani, and Second Wife in feathered capes surrounded by their friends (including Hauna and Loli) and images of their gods. They are encircled by a royal bodyguard (papa-kaua) armed with pololu spears.

The armies charge toward one another yelling at the tops of their lungs.

EXT. HOKU’ULA – LATER #65#

The armies collide and merge into one another.

With his cape slung over his left arm, Pono slices and dices with a war club.

Lani and Second Wife fight together and kick some serious butt. Lani throws a stone with her sling that stun a Maui warrior and Second Wife bashes his brains in with a war club.

Kea sequentially breaks the backs of six MAUI CHIEFS using a famous lua move.

PONO

(to Kea)

You had me worried.

KEA

You’re not the only one who can be tricky. I haven’t had so much fun since the rebellion.

EXT. HOKU’ULA – LATER #66#

Pono sees that Maui King is unguarded and he approaches him holding a war club.

PONO

You killed my mother and you are going to die.

MAUI KING

We’ll see about that.

Maui King knocks the war club from Pono’s hand.

MAUI KING

I hear you are not good at boxing. Let’s find out.

Maui King slugs Pono and knocks him down.

Pono scrambles to his feet and slugs Maui King who changes his mind and picks up a war club. Maui King swings the war club at Pono but misses.

Kea throws a war club to Pono who kills Maui King with it.

PONO

(to Kea)

Thanks, bruddah.

EXT. HOKU’ULA – LATER #67#

Seeing their King fall, the Maui forces are routed and run for the coast.

A misty rain is falling as blood from thousands of dead warriors washes into Waikaloa stream.

_EXT. KAWAIHAE BEACH – LATER_ #68#

Their canoes having been disassembled, the rest of the Maui forces are trapped on the beach and slaughtered in the surf. Blood flows into the water.

EXT. KAWAIHAE BAY – LATER #69#

Three Tiger Sharks feast on the bodies of dead Maui warriors in the surf.

EXT. HOKU’ULA – DAY #70#

The entrails of a wounded Maui Chief captured in battle are removed and every major bone in his arms, legs, pelvis, and face is methodically broken while he is still alive and screaming.

Finally, his back is broken so that his body can be bundled up and carried off the field to be sacrificed at a temple.

EXT. KAWAIHAE BEACH – LATER #71#

Pono’s Niece helps Maui King’s Son to escape and return to Maui by riding her canoe on to the beach and offering it to Maui King’s Son.

PONO’S NIECE

Here, take my canoe.

They embrace.

MAUI KING’S SON

Thank you.

They rub noses and Maui King’s Son paddles off in the direction of Maui.

EXT. TRAIL TO WINDWARD VALLEY – NIGHT #72#

Flies swarm on the bodies of the MAUI DEAD in the moonlight.

The ghostly images of the Maui Dead are seen rising from their bodies marching single file to the leaping off place to the underworld in Waipio Valley.

_EXT. KOHALA TEMPLE – DAY_ #73#

Pono sacrifices Maui King’s body to his war god.

PONO

Thank you, my people.

His Warriors cheer.

EXT. HAWAII KING’S COMPOUND – DAY #74#

Pono’s, Second Wife and SECOND WIFE’S CHILD, along with Lani and LANI’S CHILDREN, play with their royal parents, as a family.

FADE OUT

Blood Red Rain: The Rebellion-2016-07-26

CARD

!”KINGDOM OF HAWAII”

!”1830″

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EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE – DAY

Flames lick upward as an image of a tall, wooden Hawaiian god burns on a temple platform at the top of Whale Hill. The smoke from the burning image eddies down the slope.

The carved god’s head is large with elaborate grooves representing hair that sweep downward. A snarling face has a large mouth that is surrounded by parallel grooves representing a beard, with the nostrils extending outward. The body and limbs are simple elliptical volumes. The knees are bent and the calves are heavy. There is a feeling of flexed muscles and aggressive power.

EXT. BEACH BELOW WHALE HILL TEMPLE – DAY

A male MISSIONARY (30) dressed in a worn black suit is standing on the beach as a skiff carries an Englishman, DR. PELHAM (35), from a ship anchored offshore. Two NATIVES stand with the Missionary. When the skiff reaches the shore

MISSIONARY

Dr. Pelham! Welcome to Hawaii!

DR. PELHAM

Glad to be here.

MISSIONARY

We so much appreciate your visit. Many are in need of a doctor. Come. I borrowed a couple of horses to carry us uphill.

The Missionary leads Dr. Pelham to two awaiting horses.

MISSIONARY

I hope you can ride bareback. We have no saddles.

Dr. Pelham nods and accepts help up onto one of the horses. The Natives pick up his baggage.

EXT. TRAIL TO UPLAND VILLAGE – LATER

As the horses enter the nearby forest, spectacular rainbows occur in a light mist that a strong wind carries down the slope. Herds of longhorn cattle graze in grassy areas within the forest.

MISSIONARY

The Hawaiians believe this area is sacred because of those rainbows.

DR. PELHAM

Very impressive.

MISSIONARY

How was your voyage?

DR. PELHAM

Too long. I am very glad to be on solid ground.

MISSIONARY

Do stay away from the cattle. They all belong to the Hawaiian King and are wild and very dangerous.

Dr. Pelham looks backward toward the sea and the temple.

DR. PELHAM

Why is that idol burning?

MISSIONARY

You won’t believe this, but the Hawaiian King abolished the Hawaiian religion and ordered the images of their gods burned just before we arrived.

DR. PELHAM

How fortunate for you.

MISSIONARY

God is taking care of us. The Hawaiian nobles are converting to Christianity at an increasing pace. We are now working on the commoners and your visit is part of our outreach.

DR. PELHAM

What’s the plan?

MISSIONARY

We have set up a clinic for you in our church sanctuary and will bring patients to you.

A large group of MEN, each carrying from one to six pieces of sandalwood, are walking down the trail. The pieces of wood are tied on their backs by bands made of ti leaves. The bands are passed over the shoulders and under their arms, and fastened across their chests.

MISSIONARY

The King owns all the sandalwood, too. It is highly prized in China.

EXT. UPLAND VILLAGE – DAY

Hawaiian houses with stone walls and grass roofs are scattered across the landscape. Naked HAWAIIAN CHILDREN run up to the horses as they enter the village. They stop at one of the houses.

MISSIONARY

This will be your home during your stay.

He points to a much larger, but similar in design, structure.

MISSIONARY

That is our sanctuary.

They lower themselves to the ground.

MISSIONARY

It gets dark quickly here. I will collect you for dinner.

INT. MISSIONARY’S HOUSE – EVENING

A crude table is set up in the Missionary’s house. Candles flicker. The MISSIONARY’S WIFE is serving a dinner of pork and poi. Dr. Pelham smiles and bows to the Missionary’s Wife and sits down on a seat at the table that the Missionary has pulled back. Whoops and hollers can be heard. The Missionary shakes his head.

MISSIONARY

Sorry about that. There are about 60 foreigners from eight different countries living in our district. Most them act like mad men. Recently, one man bit the ear off another in a fit of intoxication.

DR. PELHAM

(smiling)

I won’t be able to help with that sort of injury.

The Missionary, his Wife, and Dr. Pelham bow their heads as the Missionary prepares to say grace.

EXT. UPLAND VILLAGE – LATER

After dinner, the Missionary and Dr. Pelham walk outside.

DR. PELHAM

I wanted to warn you that I am looking for a Hawaiian skeleton.

MISSIONARY

What?

DR. PELHAM

A colleague of mine in England wants one to study. Do you think that will be possible?

MISSIONARY

Well, Hawaiians place a lot of value on the bones of the deceased. But over 80 percent of the natives in our area have died of diseases like syphilis, smallpox, and tuberculosis, brought here by the riff-raff of the Pacific. So finding a body of a person whose relatives have died may be possible.

DR. PELHAM

Thanks for understanding.

INT. UPLAND VILLAGE SANCTUARY – DAY

Dr. Pelham is seeing patients. He performs a physical examination of an OLD HAWAIIAN (66) who has an infection in his torso. The old Hawaiian is wearing an old shirt and pants.

DR. PELHAM

How did this happen?

OLD HAWAIIAN

I wasn’t as good at spear dodging as I should have been. I have been sick for a long time. I think I will die soon.

DR. PELHAM

I hope not. Do you have any relatives who can take care of you?

OLD HAWAIIAN

Just my daughter. But I came here for a different reason. I want you to write down my family’s story before I die.

DR. PELHAM

I would be willing to do that in the evenings, but I need something from you.

OLD HAWAIIAN

What can I give you?

DR. PELHAM

Your bones. A friend of mine needs a skeleton of a Hawaiian for his research.

OLD HAWAIIAN

I agree. I will return tonight and tell you my story.

EXT. OUTSIDE DR. PELHAM’S HOUSE – EVENING

A fire is burning outside Dr. Pelham’s house. Dr. Pelham and the Old Hawaiian are sitting on logs near the fire. Dr. Pelham has a pen and paper in hand.

DR. PELHAM

Tell me your story.

OLD HAWAIIAN

I have royal blood. Here, royal succession is based on not on birth order but on a noble child’s rank.

DR. PELHAM

What do you mean by rank?

OLD HAWAIIAN

A child’s rank is determined by the genealogy of both its father and its mother. Wise kings did not have a first child with a woman of lower rank. But this is not a story about a wise king.

CARD

!”200 YEARS EARLIER”

END CARD

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EXT. NORTHERN FIELD SYSTEM – DAY

A traditional Hawaiian chant, Arise, (E Ala E) plays in the background.

On the leeward flank of a windswept mountain at the north end of the island of HAWAII, an early development stage of what will eventually become an enormous (2.5 miles wide and 12 miles long) dryland garden stretches out below. The Hill of the Jealousy (Pu’u O Kahua) towers in the distance.

Some 8,000 farmers (men who look thin and hungry) work the terraced land with digging sticks (o’o). Sugar cane grows along the terrace walls; sweet potatoes and dry-land taro (kalo) in between, normally watered by the mists that the trade winds push over the mountain.

The Hawaiian chant ends abruptly.

A tall, athletic Hawaiian youth, PONO (pronounced POE-no) (18), emerges from the distance and runs through the garden toward us and then turns right and runs downhill on a trail towards a coastal village. His black hair is short on the sides and extends down his back.

Pono passes farmers along his route, who stop to watch him. All are wearing only a loincloth (malo).

FARMERS

(chanting admiringly)

Po-no, Po-no, Po-no.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – MOMENTS LATER

Pono passes a GROUP OF YOUNG MEN learning a Hawaiian fighting (lua) move for back breaking called folded backward (pelu’ia-i-hope). Pono’s same-aged, lighter-skinned, and much shorter, but more muscular, half-brother, KEA (pronounced KAY-ah) is slowly showing the move to a same-aged cousin, NAIKA (pronounced NYE-ka). Pono’s younger full brother, UMIO (pronounced OO-me-oh) (16), is watching.

As they practice, Naika slowly throws a RIGHT PUNCH. Teaching, Kea slowly moves his LEFT FOOT FORWARD to sidestep the punch and strikes Naika’s RIGHT ARMPIT with with his elbow. Then Kea places his LEFT PALM behind Nika’s back and forces Naika’s upper body backward with his RIGHT ELBOW while pulling at the small of Niaka’s back with his left palm. Naika winces as his back bends backward.

Pono waves to his brothers with a smile on his face. He is sweating but not out of breath.

PONO

Yo, my brothers!

Pono runs toward a GROUP OF BARE-BREASTED HAWAIIAN WOMEN dressed in skirts (pa’u) making bark fiber cloth (kapa) in the shade of a palm tree.

When Pono reaches the women, he smiles and grabs a beautiful, lighter-skinned, smaller (petite) woman, LANI (pronounced LAW-nee) (16), throws her over his shoulder, and heads for the surf, dropping his loincloth on the way.

Lani smiles and enjoys the attention, but becomes self conscious. She speaks in cadence with his footfalls.

LANI

Put. Me. Down. Or I will. Never. Kiss. You again!

Pono runs into the surf, dumps Lani into the water, dives in after her, and then surfaces as she does. Pono looks into her eyes.

PONO

As you wish.

Lani smiles, her pupils dilated. As they rub noses, a wave washes over them, separating them for a while. When they surface, Pono wraps his arms around Lani, who is pouting again. They lock eyes. You can tell he is besotted by her. They whisper to one another.

LANI

I am a grown woman now. When will my grandfather let us marry? Why does he want us to wait? I want to start our family.

PONO

During the New Year’s Festival, I’ll ask the King again.

LANI

(sternly)

You’d better.

Kea yells from shore.

KEA

(shaking his head)

Break it up, you two. Brother, you won’t win the race next week if you don’t get serious.

Pono is not really listening to Kea.

One of the older women, LANI’S MOTHER, yells from the shore.

LANI’S MOTHER

Lani, come back here. Right now! You’re too old for such behavior.

Pono and Lani dutifully move toward the shore. Pono’s hands cover his crotch.

LANI

(mouthing the words)

I want to talk tonight, at our special place.

Pono nods.

EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE – EVENING

Pono, Naika, Umio, and Kea sit down to dinner. They lean back against the north wall of Whale Hill Temple (Pu’u Kohola Heiau) and glaze out toward the Hill of Jealousy.

TWO SLAVES (men with a circumflex or accent mark ^ tattooed on their foreheads) remove a small pig from an underground oven and bring portions and a bowl of poi to them.

KEA

Aren’t you and Lani moving a little fast? You’ve only been at court for a few months.

PONO

What can I say? She’s my girl.

Naika speaks while chewing.

NAIKA

And my cousin.

KEA

She’s also a King’s granddaughter with lots of admirers, one of whom is our older brother.

PONO

But, she’s not in line to inherit the throne. And Kanaloa is too old for her.

Kea shakes his head.

KEA

(pointing)

Tell me the name of that hill.

PONO

The Hill of Jealousy. So?

KEA

You really have no clue, do you?

PONO

About what?

KEA

How dangerous it is to come out of nowhere and snag the most beautiful woman at court.

PONO

Brother, you worry too much.

They continue eating.

EXT. LANI’S PARENTS’ COMPOUND – NIGHT

The moon is full. The land is bathed in MOONLIGHT.

Lani sneaks out of her parent’s house and hurries away.

EXT. POOL BELOW A WATERFALL – LATER

Her back toward us, Lani undresses, slips into the cool, still water, and swims out into the pool. She wets her hair. The ripples in the water reflect the moonlight.

Pono arrives, sits down on the shore, and gazes at Lani. She licks her luscious lips and throws back her hair.

PONO

Wow.

LANI

Come swim with me. The water feels wonderful.

Pono hesitates.

PONO

Kea says I am moving too fast.

LANI

What does he know?

PONO

More than me, for sure.

LANI

You are not moving fast enough for me.

PONO

I can tell.

LANI

You still want to marry me, don’t you?

PONO

Very much.

LANI

Then, come swim with me.

His back toward us, Pono disrobes and dives into the pool.

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INT. CHIEFS’ COMPOUND AT THE ROAD OF THE GODS BAY – DAY

Pono’s father, KEAWE (pronounced KAY-ah-vay) (45) and Pono’s older brother, KANALOA (pronounced KAH-nah-low-ah) (25), who has reddish hair (‘ehu) walk into a meeting of a group of tough-looking HAWAIIAN CHIEFS and COUNSELOR. Counselor has a white robe hanging from one shoulder. Keawe sits down.

REBEL CHIEF

(nodding at Keawe and then Kanaloa)

Welcome Keawe, Kanaloa.

Kanaloa addresses the group, gesturing toward Keawe.

KANALOA

Father’s right. We have to do something about this famine. Our side of the island is not even getting its fair share of the food we’re producing.

Kanaloa pats one of the Chiefs on the back.

KANALOA

Our warriors must be fed to be strong. The drought is even worse on Maui. They want our food and are likely to invade.

The Chiefs and Counselor nod in agreement. Keawe stands up.

KEAWE

I need your support. You know I would be a better at increasing food production and at repelling an invasion than my brother. After he is gone, I will divide the land among my supporters.

The Chiefs and Counselor smile ominously.

REBEL CHIEF

But what about his district chiefs?

KEAWE

(smiling)

You will become my district chiefs. They will become dead.

KANALOA

It is decided. Who will kill the king?

REBEL CHIEF

I’ll have one of my men stab him as he wades ashore at the end of the New Year’s Festival festival.

Rebel Chief turns to Kanaloa.

REBEL CHIEF

We’ll need to get rid of as many of his royal guards as we can at the same time.

KANALOA

Agreed. Don’t tell Pono our plans. He’s too close to his uncle. And do not disclose them to Kea or Naika either. They’re too close to Pono.

The Chiefs nod in agreement and then leave the building.

KEAWE

(shaking his head)

Kanaloa, I wish that Pono were not my highest ranking son. I should never have married his mother after you were born. When I am King, I will have you both marry Lani. (smiling) I am sure one of your children inherit the throne.

KANALOA

Thank you, father.

Keawe, Kanaloa, and Counselor leave.

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – LATER

Kanaloa and Umio approach Pono.

KANALOA

(disparagingly)

Hello, squirt.

PONO

(grudgingly)

My brothers.

KANALOA

What is this I hear about you and Lani?

PONO

It’s none of your business.

Kanaloa approaches Pono and PUSHES him backward. When Pono’s raises his arms to regain his balance, Kanaloa grabs Pono’s RIGHT LITTLE FINGER between Kanaloa’s left thumb and index finger, initiating the lua technique “grab little finger” (‘ai-lima-iki). With Kanaloa’s fingers resting against Pono’s wrist, Pono’s little finger is BENT BACKWARD as Kanaloa moves his right leg back.

Wincing as he is pulled toward Kanaloa, Pono FALLS TO HIS KNEES as Umio smiles menacingly.

KANALOA

It’s very much my business. Stay. Away. From her.

Kanaloa releases Pono’s finger and Pono rises.

PONO

It’s too late, Kanaloa. We are in love.

Pono forms his right hand into a fist and SWINGS it at Kanaloa’s head.

Kanaloa steps back with his right foot while BLOCKING Pono’s swinging right arm with Kanaloa’s left forearm, initiating the lua technique “the navel of Wakea” (ka-pico-o-Wakea). Kanaloa THRUSTS his right hand, fingers extended and joined, with the palm down into Pono’s navel area. As Pono crumples

KANALOA

In case you hadn’t heard, love is dangerous around here.

Pono hits the ground and Kanaloa and Umio start to leave.

PONO

(looking up, wryly)

Thanks for the brotherly advice.

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – LATER

A HERALD blows on a Triton or Cassis cornuta seashell (pu).

The KING (50) is holding court and the village is teaming with local PETITIONERS and the many (hundreds) members of his COURT, including Kanaloa.

FIRST PETITIONER

Sire, my neighbors’ crops have failed and they are stealing our food. They blame the drought. What should I do?

KING

My soothsayers tell me that the drought is almost over. Share your food.

First Petitioner is waved away. As Kanaloa glowers, Pono respectfully approaches the King.

PONO

Uncle, you know I love Lani and want to marry her. We are both old enough now. May we marry?

KING

I love you both, but she is my son’s highest ranking daughter and I may have to marry her to someone else first.  For political reasons. You understand.

Pono mumbles to himself.

PONO

What?

The King turns to meet another Petitioner, but speaks to Pono.

KING

Be patient. And think about how you will afford a wife.

PONO

Thank you, Uncle. We love you, too.

Pono knows he is in trouble and takes his leave.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – LATER

Across the village, Pono approaches Lani with a hang-dog look on his face.

LANI

(worried)

What happened?

PONO

He said we have to wait.

LANI

(angry now)

Wait for what?

PONO

Some political arrangements he’s making.

Pono attempts to appear nonchalant, shaking his head.

LANI

Political arrangements! Let’s just leave all this. Travel to another island. Make our own life.

PONO

Lani, I love you, but I want to work this out, here.

LANI

Well, you let me know how that turns out.

Lani stomps off in a huff.

PONO

Lani, please!

Pono shakes his head.

EXT. SURFING SPOT – DAY

Pono, naked with a long wooden (koa) surfboard under his arm, enters the water and paddles out to join other surfing nobles in the lineup beyond the surf break.

Lani and Lani’s Mother are watching him from the beach.

When Pono arrives at the break, his stomach on the board, he addresses a local surfer, HEA (pronounced HAY-uh) (16).

PONO

Aloha. How does this break work?

HEA

This time of day every fourth wave is larger. Line up behind me and I’ll show you.

Local Surfer glances toward the beach.

HEA

Who’s the girl with you?

PONO

That’s my girlfriend.

HEA

Nice, dude.

Hea catches the next large wave.

Pono waits and catches the fourth wave. He rides it toward shore. He is waved in by FIRST HUSBAND (40).

FIRST HUSBAND

After lunch, Auntie has a lesson for you.

PONO

What kind of lesson? I need some time to think.

FIRST HUSBAND

You’re not going to like it, but it’s necessary. See you at Keawe’s armory after lunch.

First Husband leaves and Pono paddles out to the lineup again.

INT. KEAWE’S ARMORY – DAY

Pono tours his father’s darkened armory with his AUNTIE (36), and her two husbands, First Husband, and his younger brother, SECOND HUSBAND (36), who are his foster parents (guardians who are raising him).

Auntie is chubby and in charge. First Husband is a jolly, rotund fellow. Second Husband is thinner and quirky.

AUNTIE

Pono, you’ve lived a sheltered life, as the oracles instructed. But, as a chief’s highest ranking son, it’s time for you to learn about life. In particular, your father wants you to learn about war.

PONO

Do I have to do this now?

AUNTIE

Yes, you do.

Pono points to a wooden implement (newa) hanging on the building. It is a beautiful koa-wood war club, lined with shark’s teeth.

PONO

(resigned)

OK. What’s that?

AUNTIE

It is a war club. It is used to kill opponents in close combat.

PONO

Ugh! I am not interested in killing opponents in battle. I’ll have no use for a war club.

Auntie looks exasperated as Pono nods at First Husband and Second Husband.

PONO

(wryly)

I think your husbands should use it to turn over stones in the underground oven when they cook our dinner.

Husbands start to laugh, but Auntie frowns them down.

Pono looks up and sees a bundle of short war spears or javelins (ihe).

PONO

What are those?

AUNTIE

These war spears are used at close range for thrusting and at long range for throwing at the enemy. Some chiefs are very good at warding off spears.

Pono takes one down and handles it.

PONO

I’d much rather be good at warding off spears than throwing them.

AUNTIE

You will get to decide which war implements are important and which are not soon enough. For now, your father makes those decisions.

Auntie turns to leave.

AUNTIE

It is time for us to travel to town for the festivities.

Pono and Husbands follow her.

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – EVENING

In town, Pono sees an old man, HIGH PRIEST (60), at a distance, whose white hair reaches below his waist. A white robe hangs from one shoulder. He is speaking with someone and is very charismatic.

PONO

Is that old man with the long hair a god?

FIRST HUSBAND

No, he isn’t a god. He’s a high priest, higher than the others. He can predict the future.

PONO

May a young man like me address him?

First Husband nods and approaches High Priest. They speak and both return to Pono who addresses High Priest.

PONO

(shyly)

Thank you for speaking with me. I’ve been told that you can tell the future.

High Priest smiles and nods.

HIGH PRIEST

Sometimes.

PONO

Please tell me then, when will there be enough food for the people?

High Priest eyes sparkle as he ponders for a moment.

HIGH PRIEST

The land will be brought to life when all things are again correct and proper.

Pono nods but does not quite understand. He moves on.

PONO

What will my future be like?

HIGH PRIEST

You will be a wealthy chief at times, but, when you reach maturity, you will be poor and be without followers.

Pono looks a little worried.

PONO

How can I avoid being poor?

HIGH PRIEST

The profession that will make you famous over all the islands is that of orator. You can avoid being poor by being a good and generous leader.

PONO

I can be good and generous. Would you teach me how to be an orator?

HIGH PRIEST

I would be happy to, my prince. Now, though, I must return to my duties.

High Priest leaves and Pono turns to First Husband.

PONO

Why did he say “My prince?” I’m not a prince. I’m just a chief’s son.

First Husband smiles and shrugs.

FIRST HUSBAND

The New Year’s Festival awaits!

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – DAY

PRIESTS prepare for the progression of the New Year’s Festival (Ma-ka-hi-ki) around the island.

A representational image of the New Year’s Festival god, LONO, is assembled and decorated. It consists of a long pole (3.5 to 5.5 meters high) carved at the top with the god’s image.

A crosspiece is attached to the pole and to it are tied colorful feather wreaths, albatross skins, and a rectangular piece of kapa that looks like a sail.

FIRST PRIEST

Hoist it up. Let’s see what it looks like.

The pole is held vertical by SECOND PRIEST.

PONO

(to First Husband)

What is that?

FIRST HUSBAND

Sorry we had to keep you away from all this. That is the god of the New Year’s Festival. It’s carried around the island on the King’s Trail. At each land division boundary, tribute is paid to our god king. By performing this ritual, we ensure success of the crops next year.

PONO

Why was I kept away?

FIRST HUSBAND

Before you were born, your mother was warned by the soothsayers that someone might harm you. So, she had us bring you up away from society.

Pono is silent but wrinkles his brow as he watches the Priests as they continue their preparations.

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – LATER

The New Years god is carried to the King’s Trail that follows the shoreline around the island. At the King’s Trail, the King greets the God with ritual tears and expressions of love.

The King is dressed in a loin cloth and a colorful red and yellow feather helmet and cloak. He is assisted by PRIESTS of the Lono cult who are dressed in white robes.

The god, King, and Priests begin a clockwise circuit of the island. A large THRONG follows the Priests, including Kea, Naika, Pono, and First Husband.

Pono pretends that he does not notice that Lani and Kanaloa are flirting with one another.

PONO

(to First Husband)

Uh. Should we bring food?

FIRST HUSBAND

The tribute will provide food for all of us. Let’s party!

Pono and First Husband join the Throng.

EXT. LAND DIVISION BOUNDARY – DAY

The OVERSEER of a land division presents collected annual tribute to the God at an alter along the trail at the land division boundary. The tribute consists of kapa cloths, skirts, loincloths, brightly-colored feathers, pigs, taro, fish, and dogs.

OVERSEER

Oh, Lono. Please accept this tribute from the unworthy people of this district.

KING

I accept your tribute in the name of Lono.

The NOBLES and COMMONERS abstain from all work as they watch the ceremony.

PONO

(to First Husband)

This is going to be fun!

The Priests begin to collect the tribute as the Throng moves on.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – DAY

At a district boundary, boxing, wrestling, sledding, rolling stone disks (maika), foot races, and other games are played.

IN ONE OPEN AREA

a DANCE TROOP performs a HULA to a DRUMBEAT.

IN A SECOND OPEN AREA

Lani stands in front of a similarly-sized MALE OPPONENT. Their arms are at their sides, wrists forward, their hands forming fists. They take turns landing a blow on the other. Neither is allowed to block the blows of the other.

She first bloodies and then knocks down her Opponent, winning a boxing match as SPECTATORS stand in a circle and PARTISANS hurl epithets.

NAIKA

Mr. Bloody Nose, you’d better go back to bed. You’re losing to a novice, a little one to boot.

Her Opponent gets up, but is knocked out cold by Lani.

PONO

(to First Husband)

That’s my girl. I am getting hungry.

FIRST HUSBAND

I smell dinner.

Pono and First Husband wander off. Naika turns to Lani.

NAIKA

I’m going to get my fortune told.

Lani tousles his hair.

IN A THIRD OPEN AREA

Naika approaches High Priest.

NAIKA

Sir, please tell me my fortune.

HIGH PRIEST

I would be happy to.

High Priest places his hand on Naika’s head and closes his eyes.

HIGH PRIEST

You will die either a king or married to a queen.

NAIKA

Wow! I mean, thank you.

High Priest wanders off while Naika stands there stunned.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – LATER

Nobles and Commoners are dressed in their best. LOUD PRAYERS are chanted by the Priests.

IN ONE OPEN AREA

Male Commoners cook pigs for men and dogs for women in underground ovens.

IN A SECOND OPEN AREA

Female Commoners are preparing kava (awa) for the crowds by chewing pepper root and spitting the juice in a bowl.

Everywhere the cries of people drunk on kava can be heard.

PONO

(to Lani)

You want to try it?

LANI

No thanks, party guy.

EXT. LEEWARD BEACH – NIGHT

At nightfall, Nobles and Commoners together go to bathe in the ocean and a sexual orgy occurs until dawn. Pono and Lani watch the revelers. Pono is amazed.

PONO

I like the New Year’s Festival.

LANI

(to Pono)

Don’t even think about joining in.

Pono smiles.

PONO

I’m in training to be an orator. Remember?

EXT. ANOTHER LEEWARD VILLAGE – DAY

At another district boundary, boxing, wrestling, sledding, rolling stone disks, foot races, and other games are played.

Pono is one of the racers. As the Racers pass Kea, he yells to a COMPETITOR.

KEA

Watch out for that root!

Pono wins the foot race when Kea trips his Competitor to the great amusement of the one hundred or so SPECTATORS.

KEA

Let’s get some rest. The festival ends tomorrow.

EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE BEACH – DAY

The King is ritualistically bathing in the ocean in front of a large CROWD at the end of the festival.

After being purified, he and his WARRIORS take their canoes out to sea and then return to shore where, as a part of the ritual, they are met by a group of warriors that ceremonially resembles an opposing army. The King is accompanied by a Warrior who is supposed to be good at warding off spears.

THIS TIME the opposing army is a real one, consisting of Keawe’s supporters. One spear is warded off and the King is touched by a second spear, in accordance with the ritual.

UNEXPECTEDLY, the King is then stabbed and killed by CATSPAW, who is, in turn killed by Rebel Chief.

Most of the Warriors who accompany the King are also killed, and Keawe steps forward.

KEAWE

(to the crowd)

I am now your king.

Pono and Lani are aghast as are others in the Crowd.

PONO

(aside to Lani)

I will protect you.

LANI

You’d better learn to protect yourself.

Keawe and his Warriors then step into the canoes and finish the ritual by paddling out to sea.

EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE – LATER

The dead King’s body is carried to the top of Whale Hill Temple and is washed and placed on the altar as a sacrifice.

PEOPLE are WAILING and some are knocking a tooth out in sorrow, with blood streaming down their faces. Lani is SOBBING uncontrollably.

PONO

Lani, I’m so sorry. This can’t be happening.

KEA

This situation disgusts me.

Pono attempts to comfort Lani, but she will have none of it.

LANI

You are as useless as my father!

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EXT. UPLAND PLAIN – DAY

Keawe is consolidating power.

Keawe, Kanaloa, and their Warriors are dirty and bloody, but jubilant. Their plan is working.

Keawe holds up a basket of bones.

KEAWE

I have in this basket the bones of all but one of my brother’s district chiefs. By tomorrow, I want this basket filled.

The Warriors cheer.

EXT. UPLAND PLAIN – LATER

The LOYAL FORCES of the one remaining OLD DISTRICT CHIEF are positioned at the top of grassy Bird Hill (Pu’u Maneo). The grass is tall and dry and the trade winds are blowing out of the northeast.

KEAWE’S WARRIORS set the grass on fire and the flames race up the hill. The SCREAMS of the Loyal Forces are heard. Kanaloa and his Warriors surge up the hill behind the flames and capture a burned Old District Chief.

DISTRICT CHIEF

It’s wrong for your father to have killed the rightful King.

KANALOA

(wryly)

The kingdom is under new management.

Kanaloa stabs and kills the District Chief.

KANALOA

(to a nearby warrior)

I want to see his bones by nightfall.

The Warrior nods.

EXT. UPLAND PLAIN – LATER

The body of the Old District Chief is placed in an underground oven and cooked by Keawe’s Warriors. After his body is cooked, his major bones are removed. The bones are placed in the basket and given to Keawe.

KANALOA

The bones of your enemies. Congratulations, Father!

INT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – DAY

The DEAD KING’S SON (30) is surrounded by BEAUTIFUL WOMEN and food. He is too fat to even move and is apparently accepting the loss of the crown.

KEAWE

I think Lani’s father will not be a problem.

KANALOA

Your rule is secure. Let’s celebrate.

Keawe chuckles.

INT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – NIGHT

Keawe is in a room filled with NOBLES and BEAUTIFUL WOMEN. They are playing a game (kilu) to see who will sleep with whom that night.

SPECTATOR

(whispering)

King Keawe is sleeping with common women again, impairing the royal bloodline. That’s not right!

FIVE PLAYERS OF EACH SEX sit facing each other in front of Spectators. The floor between them is covered with matting. In front of each Player is a conical block of heavy wood.

EACH PLAYER in turn casts a dish cut obliquely from a coconut shell in a sliding and rotary motion toward the block in front of the member of the opposite sex of his or her choosing.

A successful hit entitles a Player to a kiss and a ten hits entitles the Player to bed his or her choice.

Keawe is obviously enjoying being king and wins a Beautiful Woman.

INT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – DAY

Early the next morning KANALOA’S MOTHER (38), a red head (‘ehu), walks into the house in which Keawe and the Beautiful Woman are sleeping.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

Wake up, you old lech!

Keawe and the Beautiful Woman wake up. The Beautiful Woman quickly gathers her skirt and leaves, her head down. Keawe is groggy and grumpy.

KEAWE

Wha’ doyou want?

KANALOA’S MOTHER

In case you’ve forgotten, I’m here to remind you that the future rulers of Hawaii are going to be related to me. Got that? You promised me that our son, Kanaloa, is going to be the next king.

KEAWE

Yes, dear. I am doing what I can to make sure that happens.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

You do that.

Kanaloa’s Mother storms out.

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EXT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – LATER

Later, Pono and Lani approach Keawe.

PONO

Father, why did Uncle have to die? We all loved him so much.

KEAWE

Your uncle had to die because he was not a good king. Pono, you will go with your retainers to live in the south. Lani, you will live in the east.

LANI

But, uncle!

Pono frowns.

PONO

Father, why must we be separated?

KEAWE

Because I don’t want Lani getting pregnant just yet. I might have to marry her to someone else first for political reasons. You can also marry her later.

Pono and Lani take their leave as Lani whispers angrily.

LANI

Your father can separate us but he can’t keep me from getting pregnant.

Pono has a worried look on his face.

EXT. NORTHERN FIELD SYSTEM – DAY

The trade winds fail, reducing the rainfall on and the output of the field system and taro (kalo) paddies, making matters worse. A Keawe supporter, Rebel Chief, addresses the FARMERS.

REBEL CHIEF

You people are not producing enough food.

FIRST FARMER

We’re trying our best. The trade winds are not bringing the moisture the crops need.

Rebel Chief pulls a shark-teeth-lined war club from his loincloth and swings it at the First Farmer, tearing his neck open. The First Farmer drops.

REBEL CHIEF

If I hear any more excuses, more of you will die. Get back to work.

The Farmers go back to work, clearly upset about their co-worker’s death and angry about being blamed for the crop failure. As the Rebel Chief leaves, the Second Farmer mutters to himself

SECOND FARMER

It is our king’s disrespect for the gods that has created this desert, not us.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – DAY

The drought continues and the famine is worse. The land is brown and dying. Commoners are begging Nobles wearing red and yellow colored feathered capes for food and being refused.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – DAY

Keawe’s health declines. He looks terrible as he tours his kingdom in a procession of his COURT lead by a RETAINER BLOWING on a conch (pu) and a CHANTING Priest. Keawe falters and collapses. First Husband witnesses the collapse and hurries off.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – LATER

First Husband approaches Pono.

PONO

Have you heard? Father is sending Lani and I to live in different districts.

FIRST HUSBAND

Your father just collapsed. He’s very sick.

PONO

What?

FIRST HUSBAND

Listen to me. I want you to visit your Mother to let her know about Keawe’s failing health. Maybe she can help. This month she is at the women’s temple (heiau) she founded near Upland Village.

PONO

Why is Mother there?

FIRST HUSBAND

She teaches healing this time of year.

PONO

I’ll leave immediately, Uncle.

FIRST HUSBAND

Take Kea with you. Leave Umio here. And stay away from the virgins your mother is training.

Pono smiles.

EXT. WOMAN’S TEMPLE – DAY

Pono goes with Kea to tell PONO’S MOTHER (40’s), Keawe’s highest ranking wife, about their father’s failing health. The temple is staffed by VIRGINS who have not reached the menarche. 

Rainbows frequently reach the ground in this vicinity, creating the illusion of blood red rain, and signifying that the area is sacred.

KEA

The rainbows and blood red rain around here are amazing. I can see why your Mother chose this sacred location for her temple.

Pono reverently approaches Pono’s Mother. They hug.

PONO

Mother, Father is very ill. Uncle has asked that you see if you can help Father.

PONO’S MOTHER

I will. Pono, this is a very dangerous time. I want you to be careful. Your other half brothers are jealous of your talents.

PONO

I will, Mother.

PONO’S MOTHER

I know your heart is not in it, but you must learn how to protect yourself.

PONO

I will, Mother.

PONO’S MOTHER

I want you and Kea to promise you will take care of Umio, too. As my only other son, I want him to be safe and happy.

PONO

He’s being a jerk, but I promise.

Kea nods.

PONO’S MOTHER

On your way then. And both of you leave my virgins alone.

Pono and Kea smile and take their leave.

INT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – EVENING

Keawe is on his deathbed. He is surrounded by chanting Priests and crying WIVES, CHILDREN, and RETAINERS. The Counselor is also present. Pono’s Mother shakes her head sadly at them as Pono, Umio, and Kea enter the room.

KEAWE

My gods have shown me the error in my ways. I should never have deposed my brother. Nothing good has come of it. I must put things right before I die. Bring my brother’s granddaughter to me.

Lani is ushered into the room.

KEAWE

Lani, here, before my family, I want everyone to hear that I want you to be the next queen.

Lani is surprised, but smiles. Keawe turns his head to Pono.

KEAWE

Pono, I want you to govern with Lani.

PONO

Thank you, Father. Uh, I want to learn the arts of warfare before I share the throne. May I have a year to become proficient?

Lani frowns.

KEAWE

All right then, take Kea and Naika with you. Kanaloa will serve as Lani’s regent until you are proficient as a warrior. And, for political reasons, both you and Kanaloa will then marry Lani.

PONO

What? I mean yes, Father.

Lani’s frown deepens.

LANI

(whispering to Pono)

Why do you want to postpone our marriage? What are you afraid of?

PONO

(whispering to Lani)

I need to learn how to defend myself first, before I become a king. Remember what happened to your great grandfather’s rival and to your own grandfather?

It is clear that Lani is not satisfied with Pono’s answer. Pono and Lani take their leave.

EXT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – DAY

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea say goodbye to their Auntie, Uncles, and Mothers. One by on they hug and rub noses.

PONO

Well, I guess this is it.

PONO’S MOTHER

Be careful.

PONO

Don’t worry. We’ll have a good teacher.

PONO’S MOTHER

You’ll be passing by the volcano, Grandmother (tutu) Pele’s home. Be sure to make an offering of red berries.

PONO

We will.

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea begin to leave.

EXT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – LATER

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea see Lani. Pono approaches her.

PONO

(jesting)

Good day, Your Majesty. I was looking for you.

LANI

(unhappily)

Be serious. (beat) I’m really going to miss you.

PONO

(resigned)

The year will go by before we know it.

LANI

(sobbing)

But I need you here.

Pono grabs Lani.

PONO

I love you and I need you, too. Don’t worry. Kanaloa will take care of the ruling stuff until I return.

KEA

(nodding at Pono)

And we will take care of him.

Pono and Lani rub noses and the men leave.

EXT. LANI’S PARENTS’ COMPOUND – DAY

Lani returns home to collect her possessions and is confronted by Lani’s Mother.

LANI’S MOTHER

You must be very upset.

LANI

(wryly)

Why should I be upset?

LANI’S MOTHER

Oh, my baby. Lani, you may be married to both Pono and Kanaloa, but it is important for you to have your first child with Pono. He is Keawe’s highest ranking son and I want my grandchildren to inherit a high rank, too.

LANI

I understand, Mother. I’ll be careful.

LANI’S MOTHER

Please do. It’s the only way to prevent your children from killing one another.

LANI

I will.

LANI’S MOTHER

So, no sex until Pono returns.

Lani frowns.

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EXT. LAVA LAKE – DAY

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea walk south and then east along the King’s Trail as it crosses a lava moonscape at the edge of the island. They spot some red berries, pick them, and wrap the picked berries in a ti plant leaf.

As they approach a large crater, Pono holds their offering to the volcano goddess above his head and begins to CHANT. When they reach the edge of the crater, they peer into it.

Astonishment and awe render them mute for a while, and like statues, they stand fixed to the spot, with their eyes riveted on the abyss below.

Immediately before them yawns an immense gulf, in the form of a crescent, about two miles in length, from north-east to south-west, nearly a mile in width, and apparently 800 feet deep. The bottom is covered with lava, and the south-west and northern parts of it are one vast flood of red and yellow molten lava, in a state of terrific ebullition, rolling to and fro with fiery surges and flaming billows.

Pono comes to his senses, lowers their offering to the ground. They turn and continue along the King’s Trail.

EXT. JUNGLE – EVENING

The King’s Trail leads Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea into a dark jungle. As they walk along, Umio stops.

UMIO

Someone is watching us.

PONO

Relax little brother. We’re in friendly territory.

They continue walking and come across two crossed staffs, each with a white ball atop (pahu kapu), the sign of a forbidden area.

PONO

Now, you can get nervous.

KEA

We should reach the Warrior School soon. To prevent misunderstandings, let’s carry a flag of peace.

Kea grabs a ti plant leaf and ties at the end of a staff to indicate that their intentions are peaceful.

As they turn a corner, they meet an old woman, PELE (pronounced, PELL-lay) (60). She is wearing a white robe and greets them with a smile.

PELE

Good evening.

Pono bows.

PONO

Good evening, madame.

PELE

You are Pono, aren’t you?

Pono is surprised.

PONO

Yes, I am. How did you…?

PELE

I heard from your mother that you would be coming this way. She wanted me to give you this.

She puts a pendant containing a tear-shaped piece of volcanic glass (Pele’s tear) in his hand.

PONO

Thank you.

PELE

It’s for good luck.

PONO

I will keep it safe.

PELE

You’d better continue your journey. The school is not too far that way.

The boys look down the trail. When they look back, Madam Pele is gone.

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INT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – DAY

Kanaloa is sitting with his Mother.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

Congratulations on being named regent. It’s a good first step.

KANALOA

Thanks, mother.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

Too bad you are not Lani’s favorite. How do you plan to get her pregnant?

KANALOA

I don’t have a plan yet.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

Would you like a suggestion?

KANALOA

Sure.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

Find a male pandanus (hala) tree that is fruiting. Collect some of the sweet-scented, yellow pollen. It’s an aphrodisiac. Dust her bedding with it and she will not be able to resist your advances.

KANALOA

Thanks. I will try that. I had heard the saying “When the hala is ripe, necks are red” (A pala ka hala, ‘ula ka ‘a‘i).

KANALOA’S MOTHER

It refers to the leis made from the ripe red fruitlets of the female hala tree, and to blushing. I want more than blushing to happen.

Kanaloa smiles.

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EXT. WARRIOR SCHOOL – DAY

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea approach a Hawaiian fighting school (pa lua) which is laid out in the traditional manner. A central thatched building (hale kumu ka ‘aha) is surrounded by a low stone wall (pa) that has only one entrance and it is guarded by a GUARD.

The school’s altar (kuahu) is located at one end of the building. The altar is decorated with the seven plants traditionally used.

Pairs of STUDENTS are practicing the lua move, the blunted nose (ka-ihu-manumanu), in pairs. The moves involves the lua warrior and his opponent facing off as the opponent readies a punch with his right fist. When the opponent strikes, the lua warrior steps to his left side with his left foot while simultaneously deflecting his opponent’s right arm downward with his left arm. The lua warrior then counters with an uppercut to his opponent’s nostrils with his right fist.

The LUA MASTER (‘olohe lua) and two INSTRUCTORS walk among the students illustrating the correct way to perform the move. The flaps of all of their loincloths are tucked into their waist bands.

All the hair has been removed from Lua Master’s body and his body is covered with the coconut oil to make it difficult for an adversary to grip.

When the Lua Master sees the men approach, he signals to the Guard to allow them to enter. As they walk up to him.

LUA MASTER

Glad you made it. Let the class welcome you.

He shouts to the Students.

LUA MASTER

Let’s welcome these new students!

The Students form a line with an Instructor in front, all facing the new students, and perform a threatening BENT-KNEES DANCE (haka or ha’a).

The Instructor CHANTS aggressively, ritually threatening the newcomers, while the Students dance aggressively. Actions include facial contortions such as showing the whites of the eyes and poking out the tongue, and a wide variety of vigorous body actions such as slapping the hands against the body, stomping of the feet, and cries and grunts. Afterwards

LUA MASTER

That’s enough for today. Your sleeping house is the one on the left. Settle in.

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea walk toward their assigned house.

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INT. HAWAIIAN QUEEN’S COMPOUND

THREE IRATE CHIEFS leave the Hawaiian queen’s compound. Lani and Kanaloa are alone.

LANI

Thanks for handling those irate chiefs for me. You are good at all this ruling stuff. And it was sweet of you to find the hala pollen for me.

KANALOA

Lani, we have to talk.

LANI

OK.

KANALOA

I am supposed to have my first children with you, even if they won’t be as high-ranking as your children with Pono.

LANI

That’s what I hear, too.

KANALOA

My problem is that all the women around here are refusing to have sex with me until you have a child with Pono.

Lani smiles.

LANI

I think we can do something about that.

KANALOA

What?

LANI

Lie back and I’ll show you.

Lani performs oral sex on Kanaloa under a kapa sheet. When Kanaloa groans, they sit up.

KANALOA

That was a very good idea. Can we do that a couple of times a week?

Lani nods and they both smile.

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EXT. WARRIOR SCHOOL – DAY

Pono, Umio, Naika, and Kea have joined the other Students. The Lua Master motions for them all to sit.

LUA MASTER

You were all born inheriting the spiritual power of your ancestors. Thus, Pono and Umio, being full brothers, inherited the same amount of spiritual power.

Umio smirks.

LUA MASTER

Here you will learn to add to that spiritual power through devotion to the gods of the Hawaiian warrior and learning the teachings of this calling. First, we will tour the school. Follow me.

The Class follows the Lua Master through the school as he points at and describes the relevance of each of its facilities. At the completion of the tour, the Lua Master points to short spears leaning against a wall.

LUA MASTER

Now, I want each of you to grab a short spear and jog to the beach and back. Hold your spears vertically. When you return, store the spears and form pairs.

The Students do as they are told.

When they return, Pono pairs up with Kea.

LUA MASTER

First, you will learn boxing.

PONO

Can I learn wrestling instead?

Pono gets into a wrestling crouch.

LUA MASTER

(smiling)

It is true, you ARE too pretty to become a professional boxer, but you must learn the basics.

The Lua Master puts Pono and Kea in the proper stance: facing each other, with their arms straight and slightly in front of their sides, fists clenched, wrists bent backward, curled fingers to the front.

LUA MASTER

Now, try to hit the head of your opponent with your right fist. Neither of you is allowed to dodge the blow. The last man standing wins.

The Lua Master wanders off to monitor the other boxing Students. Pono and Kea go at it, alternatively bashing each other on the side of the head.

Kea celebrates when he knocks Pono down.

INT. HAWAIIAN QUEEN’S COMPOUND

Lani and Kanaloa are in bed again. She is performing oral sex under a cover. Kanaloa is smiling.

KANALOA

This is really solving my problem.

Lani mumbles.

EXT. SLEEPING HOUSE – EVENING

Pono paces back and forth and then stops with a worried look on his face.

PONO

Our grandfather killed his brother, the king, so he could reign. And our father killed his brother for the same reason.

Pono tightens his loincloth.

PONO

Not a job that guarantees good health, it appears. (Beat). And I have so many brothers.

KEA

(smiling)

Though I am your favorite.

PONO

I’m not worried about you. And I don’t like the idea that Kanaloa and I both will be married to Lani. She’s my girl.

KEA

I don’t know why you’re upset. Your Auntie has two husbands and they seem to do OK. I mean, really, what could go wrong?

EXT. WARRIOR SCHOOL – NIGHT

Pono and Kea are sitting on a log eating three-finger poi for dinner.

PONO

I’m exhausted.

KEA

No one said this was going to be easy. I hear that tomorrow we’ll be doing some exercises to increase our flexibility and strength.

EXT. WARRIOR SCHOOL – DAY

After breakfast, the Lua Master shows the Students how to leap, crawl, dodge, hang from their legs and arms, perform somersaults, and bend backwards. Pono is obviously out of shape.

LUA MASTER

We’ll be doing that every morning.

PONO

(wryly)

Sounds like fun.

LUA MASTER

Next, you will learn some anatomy.

The Lua Master leads the Students to a patch of sandy ground and with a spear draws in the sand the outline of a human body and then marks major internal organs with pebbles.

LUA MASTER

This is where the lungs are. A stab with a dagger here will cause a lot of bleeding. This is where the heart is. A stab here will drop an opponent and he will die. This is where the liver is. It will bleed a lot if punctured. Down here are the intestines. A stab here will cause a slow, painful death.

PONO

(aside to Kea)

He certainly has a unique perspective on anatomy.

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EXT. EAST COAST VILLAGE – DAY

Lani and Kanaloa are having oral sex again under a kapa sheet. This time Kanaloa’s head is under the sheet. When she moans, Kanaloa sits up.

KANALOA

You must miss Pono a lot.

LANI

I really do. And I don’t understand why I am kept in isolation. It makes me so angry.

KANALOA

I hope you can have some fun. I am sure Pono is enjoying being the crown prince.

LANI

I am trying to enjoy being queen, but I am so lonely.

Kanaloa gives Lani a hug. She does not see an evil smile on his face.

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EXT. WARRIOR SCHOOL – DAY

The Students are sitting in a semicircle when the Lua Master enters with High Priest.

LUA MASTER

Today, you are going to have some instruction in a competitive skill every noble must possess: oratory.

Lua Master nods to High Priest.

HIGH PRIEST

Your life may depend some day on a contest of wit. Like games of skill such as arrow throwing or checkers, tests of strength and endurance such as boxing or wrestling, and warfare-related skills such as sling-stone and spear throwing, contests of wit are often used to settle rivalries between chiefs.

The Students’ brows are furrowed.

HIGH PRIEST

Often, contests of wit depend upon the art of riddling. So, today, we are going to review some common riddles. I will make the challenge and you are to provide the answer.

The Students look at each other and smile.

HIGH PRIEST

Here’s the first riddle: My spring suspended in the air.

The Students ponder. Pono raises his hand and the High Priest points at him.

PONO

A coconut.

The High Priest smiles and nods.

HIGH PRIEST

My house has one beam and two doors.

Kea raises his hand.

KEA

Your nose.

The High Priest nods.

HIGH PRIEST

Eating and grumbling.

The Students have quizzical looks.

HIGH PRIEST

A water gourd. As one drinks, the water gurgles.

The Students smile to one another.

HIGH PRIEST

Pono has been practicing and is already pretty good at this. He will state some challenges for you.

Pono rises, smiling.

PONO

My double canoe has ten noses.

Hands shoot up.

EXT. SOUTH COAST VILLAGE – DAY

The Lua Master and the Students are standing at the top of a sledding slide. The slide is about 200 yards long with a foundation of small stones that are covered with dirt which is in turn covered with an upper layer of grass. It is steep at the top and transitions to level at the bottom. The Lua Master holds a two-runner lava sled (papa hōlua) that is twelve feet long and six inches wide.

LUA MASTER

This week you’ll learn sledding, another competitive pastime of the nobility. You must be able to ride the sled head first on your stomach, on your knees, and standing as you would ride a surf board. Watch as I demonstrate.

The Lua Master takes a running start and rides the sled to the bottom of the slide, achieving a speed of about 50 miles per hour.

When he reaches the bottom, a SCHOOL SLAVE carries the sled up to the top.

One of the Students gives it a try and crashes.

LUA MASTER

Practice makes perfect.

EXT. SLEEPING HOUSE – EVENING

Umio, Naika, and Kea approach Pono who is in bed.

UMIO

It’s time for some rest and relaxation. Let’s visit the local village. I hear the women are friendly there.

PONO

Thanks, guys. I miss Lani too much. You go on.

Umio, Naika, and Kea wander off.

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INT. EAST COAST VILLAGE – NIGHT

Kanaloa is lying on a pile of mats next to a sitting Lani. Kanaloa rises and has Lani drink kava (awa) after she finishes.

KANALOA

Lani, try some of this awa. It will help you relax.

LANI

All right.

She takes a sip.

LANI

It sure is bitter.

KANALOA

The taste improves when you drink more. Let me give you a massage.

Lani drinks more and Kanaloa begins to massage her hands.

LANI

I’m getting so sleepy.

KANALOA

Rest your head on my lap.

Lani passes out and Kanaloa has vaginal sex with her under a sheet.

EXT. EAST COAST VILLAGE – DAY

Lani wakes up in Kanaloa’s house. He is sitting next to her.

LANI

I’m so groggy. What happened?

KANALOA

You fell asleep.

LANI

Did we have sex?

KANALOA

Yes.

LANI

No more of that.

KANALOA

I hear Pono is having plenty of sex at school.

Lani frowns.

LANI

I don’t care.

Lani rolls over to her side, facing away from Kanaloa.

NT. HAWAIIAN QUEEN’S COMPOUND – DAY

Lani is alone with her Mother.

LANI’S MOTHER

You are pregnant! How did that happen?

Lani bursts out crying.

LANI

I didn’t want to but Kanaloa and I had sex. Just once.

Lani throws up.

LANI’S MOTHER

That seems to have been enough.

LANI

What should I do?

Lani’s Mother shakes her head.

LANI’S MOTHER

Abortions are dangerous. You will have to deliver this child. This could ruin everything.

LANI

(sobbing)

I know.

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EXT. WARRIOR SCHOOL – DAY

The Students learn how to use shark-teeth-lined war clubs. Kea practices with Pono. Kea stands ready, concealing his war club (leiomano) behind his back. In slow motion, Pono attacks Kea with a dagger (pahoa).

SIDESTEPPING Kea steps to the left and pushes Pono’s arm that is holding the thrusting dagger down and to the right. Kea then swings his war club up along Pono’s arm and simulates slashing it across Pono’s face. Kea accidentally cuts into Pono’s left eyebrow and it BLEEDS down his face.

PONO

You are good at that.

KEA

Practice makes perfect.

EXT. WARRIORS SCHOOL – DAY

The Students learn how to use slings.

LUA MASTER

Slings are used to throw stones at your opponent from a distance. Before use, your sling can be stored wrapped around your waist. Try it.

The Students wrap their slings around their waists and tie them.

LUA MASTER

It’s critical that you select hard, dense stones to throw with your sling. You will be able to bring some to the battlefield, but you’ll need to find others there. Do not use stones you find on cinder cones (pu’u). They are too soft and light. Here are some excellent sling stones. See if you can hit those targets.

The Students unwrap their slings and attempt to use them, very ineffectively at first.

Naika places a stone in his sling and lays his sling over his shoulder, gripping it with his left hand behind his back. STRETCHING the sling tight using both hands, his left hand releases the sling, which he then swings around his head once with his right hand, and releases. The stone hits its target and Naika smiles.

EXT. WINDWARD KALO PADDIES – DAY

The Students learn how food is produced both in irrigated taro paddies (lo’i) and in dry land systems.

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INT. HAWAIIAN QUEEN’S COMPOUND – NIGHT

Lani is going through labor.

LANI’S MOTHER

Push! Again!

LANI

Ooow!

Lani delivers the first BOY.

LANI’S MOTHER

It’s a boy. Wait. There’s another one. It’s two boys. Twins.

Lani holds a Boy in each arm. They both have flaming red hair.

LANI’S MOTHER

There will be no doubt about who their father is. You can hold them for a while, but we need to get them to their foster parents before Pono returns. You’ll need some time to work things out with him. Inspect them carefully, so you can tell others which one was born first.

Lani nods sadly.

EXT. KEAWE’S COMPOUND – DAY

Kanaloa meets with his supporters. Kanaloa’s Mother is caring for the infant Boys.

COUNSELOR

Congratulations! Two healthy sons, one of whom, with any luck, will be our next king.

Kanaloa’s Mother is beaming.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

That one is the first born.

Kanaloa stares at the Boys with a smile on his face, which turns into a frown.

KANALOA

I’m worried about Lani. Her body is hot and she’s not feeling well.

KANALOA’S MOTHER

A little fever. She’ll be fine.

EXT. HAWAIIAN QUEEN’S COMPOUND – DAY

The Students return home. Lani runs up to Pono.

LANI

I have missed you so much!

PONO

Me, too. I am so horny I could burst.

LANI

Let’s go to our special place.

Pono beams and they run off together holding hands.

EXT. POOL BELOW A WATERFALL – DAY

Lani and Pono are in the water, naked.

LANI

Pono. I have something to tell you.

PONO

What is it, my love?

LANI

While you were away, I accidentally got pregnant by Kanaloa. I had twin boys.

Pono is shocked.

PONO

Is there any thing else you want to tell me?

LANI

No. Other than I really want to have children with you, higher ranking children who will become the next king or queen.

PONO

That’s exactly what we will do after I pass the kingship tests.

EXT. HAWAIIAN QUEEN’S COMPOUND – DAY

Pono confronts Kanaloa.

PONO

Lani told me about your twins.

KANALOA

Are you going to congratulate me?

PONO

No. But I’m not all that upset either. Those boys will end up serving the next king or queen, who will be my child.

KANALOA

(snarkily)

Of course.

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – DAY

It’s New Year’s Festival time again.

The CROWD cheers as Pono competes and wins a foot race.

Kanaloa reviews the situation with his Counselor.

COUNSELOR

Pono is one popular guy.

KANALOA

Pono is getting all too popular. That could be dangerous to our plans.

KANALOA

(wryly)

I think it’s time for him to “pass” his kingship tests.

Counselor smirks.

Kanaloa walks over to Pono.

KANALOA

Congratulations! I have heard good things about your training. I think it is time for you to become king. We have to go through the kingship tests first, but it’s just a formality, of course.

PONO

I am ready, brother. Bring them on.

They walk away together.

EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE BEACH – DAY

Kanaloa tests Pono. The first test is boxing, which Kanaloa conducts himself. Lani is watching.

KANALOA

The first test will be boxing. I’ll be Pono’s opponent.

Before Pono can react, Kanaloa swings his fist and slugs Pono in the face, bloodying his nose.

PONO

(in between blows)

Brother, I thought we had agreed that I didn’t have to learn boxing.

KANALOA

A king must be prepared for all contingencies.

Kanaloa swings and slugs Pono in the face again. The match proceeds. Pono finally knocks Kanaloa down, winning the match. As Kanaloa gets up

KANALOA

Congratulations! You have passed the boxing test. Now for spear throwing.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – LATER

Kanaloa arranges a spear throwing contest. Lani and Kea are watching.

PONO

Brother, I haven’t become an expert in spear throwing, but I am proficient at spear dodging.

KANALOA

Then, spear dodging it is. Stand over there.

Kanaloa throws a spear at Pono, who catches it.

KANALOA

Good catch!  Let’s go to the beach for the rest of the test.

Pono walks off toward the beach, still holding the spear, with the others following him.

At points along the trail, increasing numbers of WARRIORS (four then eight, then 16) throw spears at Pono, which he wards off.

EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE BEACH – EVENING

At the beach, the final phase of the spear dodging test occurs. Hidden Warriors rise in front and on two sides of Pono. In addition to Lani and Kea, a Crowd has gathered.

LANI

Kanaloa. Is this fair?

KANALOA

(aside to Lani)

Do you want to have children with Pono?

First, forty spears are thrown and Pono is not hit by a single one of them.

KANALOA

You are good at this!

Then, more Warriors arise and throw eighty spears at Pono simultaneously, which is dodges.

The only injury Pono receives is that he pricks himself with his own spear on an ankle.

PONO

Ouch!

KANALOA

You passed the spear dodging contest. The next test is surfing.

The Crowd CHEERS.

EXT. SOUTH POINT – DAY

The Crowd follows Pono and Kanaloa to a big wave surfing beach. Everyone is impressed that the waves are 20 feet high. The sound of the waves breaking on the shore is deafening.

PONO

Whoa!

KANALOA

Nice waves today.

PONO

I’d say.

KANALOA

Ride one of those suckers back to the beach and you pass the test.

Pono paddles out and rides a large wave back to shore. Kanaloa is disappointed but tries not to show it.

KANALOA

The next test is oratory.

EXT. NORTH COASTAL VILLAGE – DAY

Kanaloa leads Pono, Kea, and Lani to the home of an expert in oratory.

The expert lives in a house that is surrounded by a fence made up of the bones of those he has vanquished.

KANALOA

The only way I could arrange for this test was to wager your bones. Sorry.

Pono looks at the fence.

PONO

I see he wins a lot.

KANALOA

I heard you like a challenge. Go on in; he’s expecting you.

Pono, Kea, Lani, and Kanloa walk into the house.

INT. NORTH COASTAL VILLAGE – DAY

The EXPERT (50) is an old man dressed in a loincloth. He is sitting on a mat.

EXPERT

Welcome.

PONO

Thanks.

EXPERT

Let’s start with some easy riddles:

The rain spreads the net; the wind drives it in.

PONO

Candle nut. It ripens after the rainy season and falls when the wind blows.

The Expert nods.

PONO

Here is a riddle for you: Gathered up like the feathers on the head of a bird; a proud adornment; the bird rests for eight months; on the ninth, it flies.

EXPERT

Cultivating a garden; the owner’s pride; the period of ripening; eating the fruit.

In hushed terms, the two continue trying to best one another. Finally, the Expert speaks to Kanaloa.

EXPERT

We are evenly matched. Too bad. I still need some more bones for my fence.

Kanaloa is disappointed, but puts on a smiling face and speaks to the Expert.

KANALOA

I guess that’s it. Thanks.

Kanloa turns to Pono.

KANALOA

Congratulations, Your Majesty.

EXT. QUEEN’S COMPOUND – DAY

A large CROWD has gathered in front of Lani’s residence. Kanaloa addresses the Crowd.

KANALOA

Pono has passed the tests and has the skills required to become the king. I present him our father’s standard as our new king.

Kanaloa presents the feathered standard (kāhili) to Pono and the Crowd cheers.

KANALOA

Tomorrow, we marry Lani.

EXT. QUEEN’S COMPOUND – DAY

Lani is married to Pono and Kanaloa in a festive ceremony attended by NOBLES. They sit on a dais surrounded by hundreds of ONLOOKERS and are presented with tribute: roasted pigs and dogs, containers of poi, sweet potatoes, and sugar cane.

A troop of WOMAN HULA DANCERS entertain the crowd with a HULA.

BOXERS also entertain the crowd swinging at one another.

While everyone feasts and celebrates the marriages, Pono calls Counselor over.

PONO

We are not going to be needing your services any more. I suggest you find someone else to advise.

KING’S COUNSELOR

But, your majesty, I was your father’s counselor, and your brother’s.

PONO

And I thank you for your service. Now leave.

The Counselor leaves with a scowl on his face.

EXT. NORTHERN FIELD SYSTEM – DAY

Pono and Lani visit the Northern Field System.

The trade winds have returned, and with them the fog-drip irrigation water needed by the crops. Even the hillsides are an emerald green.

Pono is “on top of the world” and feels that everything is going his way.

FARMER

Your Majesty. The rains have returned. Our crops are growing.

PONO

That’s wonderful. The kingdom is on the right track. Lani, it is time to start our family.

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EXT. OUTSIDE DR. PELHAM’S HOUSE – EVENING

Dr. Pelham and the Old Hawaiian are still at it.

DR. PELHAM

What a relief! I was getting worried.

OLD HAWAIIAN

There is more. Remember the High Priest’s predictions?

DR. PELHAM

About how there will be a time when Pono has no friends?

OLD HAWAIIAN

And about when Naika will die.

DR. PELHAM

Then, please continue. This is great.

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EXT. HAWAII ROYAL COMPOUND – EVENING

A CROWD is milling around a ceremonial white kapa tent. Pono and Lani enter the tent where Pono is supposed to impregnate her. Outside the tent, Pono’s Mother CHANTS prayers for the union. This goes on for a while.

When Pono attempts to leave under the edge of the tent, he is dragged back into the tent (by a leg) by Lani who really wants this to work.

INT. HAWAII ROYAL COMPOUND – DAY

Later in the month, Lani sees she is having her period and is disappointed.

LANI’S MOTHER

I’m so sorry.

LANI

Mother, I’m afraid I can’t get pregnant by Pono.

LANI’S MOTHER

Getting pregnant can take time, sometime months. Be patient. But for now, you will have to have to spend time in the menstruation house.

EXT. MENSTRUATION HOUSE – EVENING

As is the custom, Lani must stay in the compound for unclean women while she is menstruating and is teased about not being pregnant yet by the other WOMEN staying there.

FIRST WOMAN

Lani, are you sure you are holding your mouth right?

SECOND WOMAN

Lani, we thought you knew how to do this. Maybe if Pono tried while you were asleep.

Lani knocks out the Second Woman by swinging her RIGHT FIST against the woman’s head.

EXT. HAWAII ROYAL COMPOUND – MORNING

The white tent is set up again. Pono and Lani enter the tent holding hands as PRIESTS pray outside.

INT. HAWAII ROYAL COMPOUND – DAY

Again, Lani discovers she is not pregnant. Consoled by her Mother, Lani is beside herself with anguish.

LANI

I’ve got to get pregnant!

LANI’S MOTHER

It will happen. Have faith.

LANI

I’m worried. And Pono is getting very upset.

LANI’S MOTHER

Worst case is the twins will be your heirs.

LANI

Don’t even say that around Pono.

They hug.

EXT. LEEWARD BEACH – DAY

Pono expresses his frustration to Kea as they sit on the beach. Pono is feeling (punalua) jealousy, that is, jealousy in a Hawaiian plural marriage.

PONO

I’m starting to get worried that I can’t get Lani pregnant.

KEA

Knowing you two, it will happen.

PONO

And Kanaloa is acting so self satisfied. It’s driving me crazy.

Kea pats Pono on the back.

KEA

Let’s get out of here and do some surfing.

They head out with their surf boards.

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INT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – DAY

Pono’s adversaries regroup and try to get rid of him.

REBEL CHIEF

Pono’s not being able to have children with Lani is a sign from the gods. You have to get rid of him.

KANALOA

He’s too good at self defense and Kea has his back. We need to get creative.

REBEL CHIEF

What about poison?

KANALOA

I have a few other things to try first.

EXT. HAWAII ROYAL COMPOUND – EVENING

Kanaloa again tries to seduce Lani.

KANALOA

Lani, I hear you want to have another child. I’m here to help.

LANI

No thanks, Kanaloa. You’ve helped enough already.

KANALOA

Maybe the gods don’t want you to get pregnant again.

Lani frowns.

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EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – DAY

Kanaloa sets up a situation which makes it appears like Lani has a lover, and maybe she does.

PONO

I need to meet Kanaloa up country. The forest clearing operation there is not going fast enough.

LANI

All you two do is work. When are we going to have some fun? I’m taking surfing lessons from a young man named Hea that Kanaloa introduced me to.

PONO

Who is he? Why a guy?

LANI

He is the son of a couple Kanaloa’s Mother knows. A very nice boy. You don’t have to worry about him. He tells me he is in love with another guy.

PONO

That does not make me any less jealous. Remember, our great grandfather, Liloa (pronounced LEE- low-ah), was in love with another guy. (Beat.) I rest my case.

LANI

Oh, you’re being unreasonable!

Lani leaves, angry.

EXT. UPLAND FOREST – DAY

Pono and Kanaloa are supervising COMMONERS clearing of a part of the upland forest near the Upland Village and constructing ditches to irrigate the crops that will be grown there. Lani is there, too.

PONO

Cutting these trees down and burning them is taking longer than we expected. We have to these irrigated gardens on line as soon as possible.

KANALOA

I agree. With lower rainfall, this effort is critical. I’ll have more workers brought in.

LANI

All you two do is work. When are we going to have some fun? I am going surfing.

Lani leaves for the beach. Kanaloa smiles surreptitiously.

EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – DAY

Pono decides he should put some distance between Lani and potential lovers.

PONO

I hear the food situation is getting worse on the island of Oahu. Let’s travel there to see for ourselves what they are doing about the problem.

LANI

I would prefer to learn how to surf, but OK.

They begin preparations for the trip.

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EXT. DOUBLE CANOE CONVOY – DAY

Pono and Lani attempt to travel to Oahu with their PADDLERS and RETAINERS on several double canoes. As they are passing a Neighbor Island, the sky darkens.

CHIEF PADDLER

Sire, a storm is forming. We should wait it out.

PONO

I agree. Head for shore.

They land on the Neighbor Island as the storm hits.

EXT. NEIGHBOR ISLAND VILLAGE – DAY

Pono and Lani are playing Hawaiian checkers (konane) on a stone board at the base of a cliff when Hea calls down.

HEA

Lani, your lover sends you his kisses.

Lani attempts to distract her husband but he hears Hea faintly, too, he thinks.

PONO

What was that?

LANI

Three pawns. I am winning.

PONO

I meant the guy.

Lani appears to be self-conscious, confirming to Pono what he thinks he has heard.

LANI

Your move.

In anger, Pono hits Lani on the head with the board and Lani falls down, bleeding and seemingly lifeless.

PONO

Oh, my god.

Lani’s Retainers rush to her fallen body.

RETAINER

She’s dead.

Pono rushes off sobbing.

EXT. NEIGHBOR ISLAND BEACH – DAY

Pono approaches a couple of Paddlers.

PONO

You two, take me to Kauai.

FIRST PADDLER

Kauai? Right now? The storm is still dangerous. And the distance is greater.

PONO

I don’t care.

Pono sails for the island of Kauai in a double canoe with his Paddlers in the middle of the storm, leaving his Retainers behind. The canoe contains an invaluable collection of feathered cloaks and his even more valuable feathered standard.

EXT. OPEN OCEAN – DAY

In the double canoe, Pono is acting strange.

PONO

When we get there, I want to go see the Trunkless Koa Tree, alone.

FIRST PADDLER

Yes, Sire.

The double canoe continues on course.

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INT. NEIGHBOR ISLAND VILLAGE – MORNING

Surprisingly, Lani is recovering. She is approached by a lessor member of their traveling party, OTHER LANI.

OTHER LANI

My queen, I’m the innocent cause of this situation. My name is Lani, too. Hea is my lover. He was calling to me.

LANI

You’re his lover? He was calling to you?

OTHER LANI

Yes, my queen.

Lani is exasperated.

LANI

Great. What a mess! Leave me.

The Other Lani quickly takes her leave. Lani’s Retainers don’t know what to think.

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EXT. WINDWARD VILLAGE – DAY

A RUNNER approaches from the shoreline.

RUNNER

Kanaloa, Lani is dead. Pono has killed her.

KANALOA

What? How did it happen?

RUNNER

He got angry and hit her.

KANALOA

Are you sure?

RUNNER

Yes.

KANALOA

Oh, my god! I never expected this!

Kanaloa gets angry.

KANALOA

He can’t get away with this. Pono is not fit to be king. We’ll raise an army.

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EXT. KAUAI BEACH – DAY

Pono’s double canoe is pulled up on the beach by Paddlers while Pono wades through the surf.

Pono strides up the beach muttering to himself while the Paddlers wait for instructions.

FIRST PADDLER

The King is acting very strange.

SECOND PADDLER

I would act strange, too, if I had just killed my wife, the queen. Let’s stay with the canoe. Maybe he’ll get better and return.

First Paddler nods.

EXT. KAUAI FOREST – EVENING

Pono is crying, stumbling along a trail into the forest carrying a stone ax. It is raining.

He is watched by an unknown man, MANA (18), who begins to follow him. Eventually, Pono sees Mana on the trail behind him.

PONO

Who are you? Why are you following me?

MANA

My name is Mana. Your paddlers were not following you, so I decided to help. Where do you want to go?

PONO

I want to find the Trunkless Koa Tree and make a spear from it. Can you guide me there?

Upon hearing Pono’s strange request, Mana hesitates.

MANA

Uh, yes, I can. Follow me.

Mana takes the lead. They walk a long way in the rain and come to a lava tube cave.

MANA

Let’s stop here for the night. It’s dry.

Pono nods and continues mumbling to himself and crying. He lies down in the cave. Mana hands Pono a peeled banana and eats the skin.

EXT. KAUAI FOREST – DAY

It’s still raining. Hard. Both mens’ kapa loincloths are drenched and in tatters. Pono is shivering. Mana leads Pono to a misshapen koa tree. The tree’s large branches appear to sprout out of the ground.

MANA

That is the tree you are seeking.

Pono sits down, oblivious to the rain, and looks at the tree.

PONO

Thank you.

After a while, Pono cuts off a straight, spear-length branch of the tree with his stone ax.

PONO

I feel better now. I accidentally killed my wife.

MANA

Sorry to hear that. You look miserable.

PONO

I feel terrible. (beat) You are a good man. Would you accompany me on my journey to Oahu?

MANA

I would be happy to. We can obtain new loincloths on the coast. Let’s go back to the cave and get some rest.

Pono nods and they walk back down the trail. Mana carries the branch.

EXT. KAUAI BEACH – DAY

The next morning Pono and Mana walk back to the canoe. When they reach the canoe, Pono speaks to the Paddlers.

PONO

Making sure no one steals my canoe?

The Paddlers cringe.

PONO

Find new loincloths for my new friend and I.

The Paddlers search for and find the loincloths and hand them to Pono and Mana who put them on. Pono dons his feathered cape.

PONO

Take us to the Oahu King’s Compound. When we get there, do not tell them who I am if you want to be alive afterwards.

The Paddlers nod and launch the double canoe as Pono and Mana clamber aboard.

EXT. CHANNEL BETWEEN KAUI AND OAHU – DAY

Pono speaks with Mana as the Paddlers paddle.

PONO

The king of Oahu, King Kaku, may have heard of my predicament. My goal is to convince him not to invade Hawaii while we are in disarray.

Mana nods.

MANA

How are you going to do that?

PONO

I’ll find out once we’re there.

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EXT. OFF THE HAWAII COAST – DAY

After she recovers, Lani makes a decision.

LANI

I want to find Pono. Take me back to Leeward Village.

Lani and her Paddlers and Retainers board their double canoes and head back to Hawaii, looking for Pono.

Lani’s head is bandaged.

EXT. LEEWARD VILLAGE – DAY

When Lani reaches Hawaii, she seeks out her Mother.

LANI

Is Pono here?

LANI’S MOTHER

Thank the gods you are still alive!

LANI

A little worse for wear, but I’m alive.

LANI’S MOTHER

What happened?

LANI

It was an accident.

Lani’s mother scowls.

LANI’S MOTHER

That’s not what I heard.

LANI

It won’t happen again. He needs me.

LANI’S MOTHER

Well, anyway, a rebellion is occurring. Pono’s being deposed by his brothers and the district chiefs.

LANI

What do you mean “rebellion?”

LANI’S MOTHER

Kanaloa and the rest of them think Pono has killed you and have raised an army to defeat him.

LANI

Tell them I am alive. I have to get to South Point to talk to Kea.

Lani prepares to sail south and consult with Kea.

EXT. OFF THE HAWAII COAST – DAY

Lani and her Paddlers and Retainers board their double canoes and head toward South Point.

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EXT. OAHU BEACH – DAY

Pono and Mana jump out of Pono’s double canoe. Pono’s Paddlers pull his double canoe onto an Oahu beach near the Oahu King’s Compound. The canoe is flying the feathered standard that is the symbol of the nobility of the Hawaii Kingdom.

Pono and Mana are ushered by GUARDS into the presence of Counselor. Pono is wearing a feathered cape exhibiting diamond shapes indicating he is from the Kingdom of Hawaii. He is surprised by his welcome.

COUNSELOR

Welcome stranger. I see you are from Hawaii. What is your business here?

PONO

I’ve come to visit the king. I want to challenge him to a word game.

Counselor does not look into Pono’s eyes. He steps backward.

COUNSELOR

The King loves word game challenges. But tonight, a kila contest is scheduled. Please join in. We can set up a word game contest tomorrow.

PONO

Thank you. I will.

COUNSELOR

I warn you, the King excels at word games.

Pono smiles.

The Counselor motions for the Guards to leave.

COUNSELOR

Really, Pono, why are you here?

Pono pushes Counselor against the wall.

PONO

That is my business. If you tell King Kahu who I am, I’ll kill you.

Pono steps back. Counselor nods.

COUNSELOR

I believe you.

The Counselor smiles painfully and leaves.

EXT. OAHU KING’S COMPOUND

Pono huddles with Mana.

PONO

The Counselor knows me.

MANA

Who is he?

PONO

He was a counselor to my father. I dismissed him when I became the king.

MANA

Is he a threat?

PONO

Yes. He’s not to be trusted. If King Kaku recognizes me, I may be killed.

MANA

Over my dead body.

PONO

I’m sure that could be arranged.

INT. OAHU KING’S COMPOUND – EVENING

Pono walks into a room filled with NOBLES and BEAUTIFUL WOMEN. They are playing kilu to see who will sleep with whom that night. The king of Oahu, KING KAKU (30) is also playing.

Pono sits in the line of five male players opposite five female players facing each other in front of the spectators. The floor between them is covered with matting. In front of each Player is a conical block of heavy wood.

When the game starts, two Women begin flirting with Pono and competing with one another to win him for the night. One of the Women is a chiefess from Kaui, OHAI (pronouced Oh-HIGH). She is heavily tattooed.

By the end of the evening, Ohai wins Pono. They huddle.

OHAI

Sorry to be so pushy. I’m from Kaui. Tomorrow I’m on my way to Hawaii to consummate an arranged political marriage. I need help forgetting about that.

PONO

Let’s go to the beach.

They leave the compound talking with one another.

EXT. OAHU BEACH – EVENING

Pono and Oahi are reclining on the beach.

OHAI

I am so sorry to hear about Lani. Come here you poor guy.

They are attracted to one another and make love. Afterwards,

PONO

I feel better.

Ohai smiles.

OHAI

My pleasure.

PONO

You could do me a big favor. Do you know any new chants our host will not know?

OHAI

My new name chant. It was created before I left home.

PONO

Teach it to me.

Ohia teaches the CHANT to Pono.

INT. OHAU KING’S COMPOUND

The Counselor whispers to King Kahu.

COUNSELOR

Your guest from Hawaii has issued a word play challenge to you.

KING KAKU

Should I take him up on it? What can he wager?

COUNSELOR

He carries with him personal possessions that have some value.

KING KAKU

This will be fun. Show him to the guest house.

The Counselor leaves.

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EXT. SOUTH POINT – DAY

Lani’s Paddlers land her canoe on a green sand beach.

She finds Kea, practicing his Hawaiian fighting moves, as usual.

He stops, surprised.

LANI

You’ve heard then.

Kea runs to hug Lani.

KEA

Yes, but I’m so glad the news was wrong.

LANI

I still love the idiot. What should we do?

KEA

We have to get Pono back here. We will need his eloquence to recruit chiefs to our side.

LANI

I’ll sail for Oahu and convince him to come back.

KEA

Meet me back here.

Lani nods and sets sail for Oahu with her Paddlers and Retainers.

EXT. OFF THE HAWAII COAST – DAY

Lani and her Paddlers and Retainers board their double canoes and head to Oahu.

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EXT. OHAU KING’S COMPOUND – MORNING

As Ohai prepares to leave for Hawaii to get married, she is approached by King Kaku. Three OAHU KING’S RETAINERS accompany King Kaku.

KING KAKU

Before you leave, do you know any new chants? I need one that no one else knows.

OHAI

How about my new name chant?

KING KAKU

Great! Teach it to my retainers, who will teach it to me.

OHAI

Of course.

Ohai teaches a part of the name chant to each of the Oahu King’s Retainers but does not tell them that she has also taught it to Pono.

EXT. OAHU BEACH – DAY

Ohai leaves for Hawaii with OHAI’S PADDLERS in a double canoe. Pono is on the beach where he smiles and waves goodby. She winks and blows him a kiss.

EXT. OHAU KING’S COMPOUND – DAY

Pono is ushered into the Ohau King’s Compound. He bows to King Kaku.

PONO

King Kaku, I’d like to challenge you to a word game.

KING KAKU

How about each of us reciting a chant about Kaui?

PONO

Let’s see. (beat) OK. What is the wager?

KING KAKU

How about the contents of my house versus the contents of your canoe?

Pono looks around.

PONO

Sounds fair.

KING KAKU

You go first.

Pono recites PONO’S NAME CHANT followed by the CHANT he has just learned.

King Kaku frowns at his Counselor and then rolls his eyes.

KING KAKU

(aside to Counselor)

Who is this man? What does he think he is?

When Pono finishes, King Kaku concedes.

KING KAKU

You win that round.

PONO

Let’s go outside, so my retainer can inventory the contents of your house.

They exit. When the Counselor attempts to follow them, Mana looks in Pono’s eyes. Pono nods his head to Mana, a sign he wants to kill Counselor. Mana hands Pono a war club and Pono kills Counselor.

When King Kaku starts to object

PONO

He disrespected me. He is mine. I want his bones.

King Kaku is upset, but resigned.

KING KAKU

Of course.

King Kaku does not know what to make of Pono. He thinks Pono is crazy and dangerous.

INT. OAHU KING’S COMPOUND- EVENING

Pono and King Kaku are playing Hawaiian checkers when KING KAKU’S BODYGUARD enters.

KING KAKU’S BODYGUARD

Sire, a double canoe is approaching.

KING KAKU

When it lands, find out who it is.

KING KAKU’S BODYGUARD

Yes, Sire.

EXT. OAHU BEACH – LATER

Lani’s double canoe is pulled up on the beach by her Paddlers. King Kaku’s Bodyguard approaches.

LANI

That is my husband’s canoe. Where is he?

King Kaku’s Bodyguard bows before the queen.

KING KAKU’S BODYGUARD

Welcome, heavenly one. He is playing checkers with King Kaku.

LANI

Lead me to him, but let me announce my presence.

King Kaku’s Bodyguard nods and leads her away.

EXT. OAHU KING’S COMPOUND – LATER

King Kaku’s Bodyguard indicates that Pono is inside.

Lani begins to chant PONO’S NAME CHANT.

INT. OAHU KING’S COMPOUND – CONTINUOUS

King Kaku and Pono hear Pono’s name chant being chanted. For a moment, Pono does not recognize Lani’s voice. Then, he does.

Tears well up in his eyes as he smiles at King Kaku and races outside.

EXT. OAHU KING’S COMPOUND – CONTINUOUS

Outside, Pono runs to Lani. They tearfully embrace. Pono holds Lani at arm’s length.

PONO

What? How?

LANI

You missed, you big idiot. After all that training.

Pono embraces Lani again.

PONO

I’m so glad. I’m so sorry.

They disengage.

LANI

Have you heard about the rebellion?

PONO

No. What do you mean?

LANI

All your brothers, except Kea, have raised a rebellion against you. They are unconcerned that I am actually alive. We have to get back.

PONO

We sail tomorrow.

Pono sweeps Lani up in his arms and carries her to the guest house. Over his shoulder, Pono shouts to King Kaku.

PONO

This is my wife.

King Kaku smiles and tells his Bodyguard.

KING KAKU

Those Hawaiian islanders are a strange people.

EXT. OPEN OCEAN – DAY

Pono and Lani sit together in one of the two double canoes in route to Hawaii island. They are both wearing feathered capes. Mana is in the other canoe.

LANI

Where did you pick up Mana?

PONO

On Kauai. He helped me when I was very despondent.

LANI

Good. That you were despondent and that he helped you.

INT. SOUTH POINT – DAY

Pono and Lani hug Kea and then sit down to consult with him. It is raining.

KEA

Welcome! We have quite a mess on our hands. Word is Kanaloa is organizing the revolt. All of the district chiefs who have committed to one side or the other have committed to him, except me of course.

LANI

Who is left?

KEA

(wincing)

The Kona chiefs.

PONO

Ouch! So, we’re outnumbered two to one.

KEA

So far, yes. Our only hope is for Pono to use his powers of persuasion on the Kona chiefs and their followers and convince them we can win.

PONO

Let’s get to work. How many warriors do you have?

KEA

About 10,000.

LANI

That’s a start. I will send a messenger to call a council of the chiefs in Kona. Let’s get some rest and meet with them there tomorrow.

They rise to leave.

INT. BEACH SHELTER – EVENING

Pono and Lani settle down for the night in a lean-to on the beach.

PONO

Do you think we can win?

LANI

We had better. You won’t last long if we don’t.

PONO

You’re right about that. But that’s tomorrow. Come here beautiful.

Lani smiles and Lani and Pono begin to make love.

EXT. KONA CHIEF’S COMPOUND – DAY

Lani and Pono speak to the gathered KONA CHIEFS.

LANI

As you all can see, your queen is still very much alive. And Pono is still your king.

PONO

The rebellion will fail. We may be outnumbered, but the gods are on our side.

Some of the Kona Chiefs nod, but are not convinced.

PONO

In fact, the fewer of us, the greater share of honor to us each. We are a few; yet we are a happy few, a band of brothers. For whosoever fights with us will be part of my family and will be able to boast of our victories to his sons and grandsons.

LANI

As to our daughters and grand-daughters.

The Kona Chiefs cheer in agreement.

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EXT. UPLAND PLAIN – DAY

Rebel leaders develop their plan.

KANALOA

I want our warriors to be spread along the western coast in small groups. When Pono returns, I want him killed.

REBEL GENERAL

I will make that happen.

They part.

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EXT. KONA CHIEFS’ COMPOUND – LATER

Pono and his SUPPORTERS see a dust cloud approaching from the direction from which the rebels would approach. It becomes clear that it is a GROUP of about 600 warriors that approach nearer and nearer. Pono whispers to Lani.

PONO

Be prepared to take to a canoe if we have to.

Kea orders his troops.

KEA

Surround the King and Queen!

Kea’s warriors form into a tight battle formation around Pono and Lani.

After some anxious moments, the Group halts about two hundred paces from Kea.

As the dust settles, a tall young chief wearing a feathered can and helmet emerges from the Group. At the end of his spears tied a large ti leaf, a token of peace.

Accompanied by two AIDES bearing weapons similarly bedecked, he boldly strides past the ranks of Pono’s warriors and asks for Pono. When he is conducted to Pono and, observing Lani beside her husband, speaks.

NAIKA

Cousins, I heard you were back and needed some help. I have with me a few brave warriors whose service I now pledge to you.

Ponol, Lani, and Kea smile. The Kona Chiefs relax.

PONO

Welcome, cousin. We are glad to see you, and your men. But are you not afraid to be my friend at a time like this? The whole island seems to be in arms against me.

NAIKA

I’m glad to be here. My fate is to long outlive this war.

Lani gives Naika a big hug.

EXT. KONA CHIEFS’ COMPOUND – EVENING

Inspired by Naika’s appearance, more warriors rally to Pono’s side. Soon, warriors are streaming into the compound.

EXT. KONA CHIEFS’ COMPOUND – LATER

Pono, Lani, Kea, and Naika sit around a campfire and develop a battle plan.

PONO

Shouldn’t we try to get the word out to the rebels that Lani is not dead.

LANI

Somehow, I don’t think that is going to help. I think they know already, after my visit with my mother.

PONO

Well then, let’s stick to the high ground and duke it out when we have to. It goes without saying that Kea will be my general.

LANI

Our general.

KEA

OK, we’ll march at night and be ready for battle when the sun rises. We know the rebels are arrayed along the coast, so we’ll march to Ten Days Hill.

They all nod.

EXT. TEN DAYS HILLS – NIGHT

Pono’s army marches over a high saddle during the night and are arrayed in battle formation high on Ten Days Hill. Each warrior carries two unlit torches.

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EXT. LEEWARD COAST – NIGHT

Rebel warriors are asleep in small, separated groups along along the coast.

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EXT. TEN DAYS HILL – NIGHT

With lit torches in their hands, Pono’s warriors proceed downhill toward the coast in battle formation. Pono and Lani are surrounded by their supporters.

LANI

How long before they notice us?

PONO

It won’t be long now.

EXT. LEEWARD COAST – NIGHT

CRIES go up as the rebels realize they are being attacked.

REBEL GENERAL

Pono has an army! How did that happen?

KANALOA

Quickly, gather our forces!

Rebel General sends out messengers and the rebels forces gather. Umio follows Kanaloa.

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EXT. LAVA FLOW – MORNING

The sun rises.

Both of the armies are arrayed in standard Hawaiian battle formations on a recent and hilly lava flow between the coast and Ten Days Hill.

Out front are skirmishers (huna lewa) carrying javelins (ihe). They are backed by a larger body (huna paa). Behind these come groups of perhaps a thousand veteran warriors each (waa kaua). Last come the mass of the rank-and-file soldiery (poe kaua). In their midst stand the leaders in feathered capes and helmets surrounded by their friends and images of their gods. The leaders are encircled by a royal bodyguard (papa-kaua) armed with pololu spears.

A pitched battle ensues. Pono’s forces are driven back by the larger REBEL FORCE. Kanaloa yells to the Rebel General.

KANALOA

The Queen is fighting on the other side! Let’s quit the pursuit to make sure she isn’t accidentally killed.

The Rebel General shouts to his Chiefs.

REBEL GENERAL

Hold your ground. No pursuit. Move your men to the north; get off this damned lava flow!

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EXT. LAVA FLOW – LATER

In another part of the battlefield, a wounded Naika is taken prisoner by the Rebels.

REBEL CHIEF

Take him to Whale Hill Temple and sacrifice him to our war god. I want his bones.

Two Warriors hustle Naika off the battlefield as his colleagues retreat up Ten Day Hill.

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EXT. TEN DAY HILL – EVENING

In the midst of the fog of war, Pono, Kea, and Lani consult.

PONO

There were a lot more of them that I thought.

KEA

We need to arrange things so we have to fight fewer of them at once.

LANI

How about we draw them in and then hit them from the flanks? If we can separate the leaders from the troops, the troops will quit and run.

Pono and Kea nod.

PONO

Where is Naika?

CUT TO:

EXT. WHALE HILL TEMPLE – DAY

Terrible, dry enhanced trade winds (mumuku) are blowing down the from the uplands. Dust is in the air.

Rebel Warriors lead Naika by a rope around his neck to the altar of Whale Hill Temple. Naika’s hands are bound. The REBEL PRIEST gives orders to the warriors.

REBEL PRIEST

Kill him.

Ascending the steps of the altar, Naika speaks.

NAIKA

I am ready, but it is not the will of the gods that I be offered.

The Rebel Priest responds sternly.

REBEL PRIEST

What do you know of the will of the gods?

NAIKA

And what do you know, since you have not inquired?

For a moment the Rebel Priest is disconcerted, but finally he answers.

REBEL PRIEST

You say it is not the will of the gods. Make it so appear, and your life will be spared; but if you fail your right eye will see the left in my hand, and you will be slain with torture.

NAIKA

So let it be!

Naika lifts his face upward and addresses a CHANT to the gods.

The winds die away and birds in the neighboring trees grow silent.

Concluding his prayer, Niaka folds his arms and steps down from the alter. By an unseen hand, the cords that had bound his hands have been cut. Naika approaches the Rebel Priest and bows before him.

The manifestation of the will of the gods cannot be mistaken. Naika is lead to a hut within the temple.

REBEL PRIEST

I suggest you remain in this sanctuary where you will be under my protection until you can leave in safety.

CUT TO:

EXT. UPLAND PLAIN – MORNING

The Rebels are drawn out by a trick: a small number of Pono’s men carrying two lighted torches each walk down slope.

Just before the decoys and the thin line of rebel forces meet, Pono attacks with a division from the north and Kea attacks with a division from the south. Naika joins the fray.

The Rebel General is captured by Pono and the remaining rebel forces flee to the north.

EXT. HILL OF JEALOUSY – DAY

Pono’s warrior’s pursue the Rebels. Pono urges his Troops onward.

PONO

Push them up the Hill of Jealousy if you can.

Pono catches up with Kanaloa. They square off and fight. Pono has Kanaloa on the ground with the point of a spear against his throat. Naika is simulating grief at Kanaloa’s defeat, when Lani arrives.

LANI

No! Pono, please, no. He is the father of our children.

After hesitating for a moment, Pono withdraws his spear. At Pono’s command, Kanaloa is hauled off by Warriors.

Pono’s younger brother, Umio, is seen running to the east.

PONO

Looks like little brother is running back to our mother. I will visit her, too.

EXT. WOMEN’S TEMPLE – DAY

As Pono walks up hill toward the Women’s Temple, blood red rain falls.

When Pono reaches the Woman’s Temple and sees his Mother, Umio attempts to kill Pono with a spear which Pono dodges. Pono walks up to Umio with his own spear raised.

PONO’S MOTHER

Pono, please, please spare him. He is my only other son. I will punish him.

Pono lowers his spear.

EXT. NORTHERN FIELD SYSTEM – DAY

In the final image of the main story, Pono walks through a much larger version of the Northern Field System, this time toward the Hill of Jealousy with he and Lani holding hands. The (now plumper) farmers cheer him again, this time as their leader.

!CUT TO:

EXT. OUTSIDE DR. PELHAM’S HOUSE – NIGHT

Dr. Pelham is feverishly writing down the Old Hawaiian’s story and then finishes.

DR. PELHAM

That is a wonderful story. Is it true?

OLD HAWAIIAN

I am tired now. Thank you for writing down my story. Please give it to those who are collecting such stories.

DR. PELHAM

I will. You get some rest.

INT. UPLAND VILLAGE SANCTUARY – DAY

Dr. Pelham is seeing PATIENTS again. A HAWAIIAN WOMAN approaches him. The Hawaiian Woman looks a lot like Lani, but is older and is wearing simple skirt and blouse.

HAWAIIAN WOMAN

Dr. Pelham. Thank you for writing down my father’s story.

DR. PELHAM

I was happy to. How is he doing?

HAWAIIAN WOMAN

He has died.

DR. PELHAM

I am sorry to hear that. Did he tell you of the arrangement we have?

HAWAIIAN WOMAN

Yes, but I disapprove. They are not his bones; they are our family’s bones. We will bury him tonight.

DR. PELHAM

Is there anything I can offer you?

HAWAIIAN WOMAN

No.

DR. PELHAM

I understand.

EXT. OUTSIDE DR. PELHAM’S HOUSE – NIGHT

Dr. Pelham sits outside his house reading the his notes in the moonlight.

He watches as the Hawaiian Woman and THREE HELPERS carry the shrouded body of the Old Hawaiian out of the village. They are also carrying three unlit torches.

He surreptitiously follows them into the quasi-darkness.

EXT. BURIAL CAVE OPENING – NIGHT

After walking for a time, the Hawaiian Woman and her Three Helpers reach an opening in the top of a burial cave. The burial cave is a large, dark lava tube.

They light a torch and toss it into the opening. Then, they lower the body into a burial cave and follow it down using an old rope.

Dr. Pelham hears CHANTING in the burial cave. He looks around for landmarks and then quickly returns to his house.

EXT. BURIAL CAVE – NIGHT

The next night, Dr. Pelham returns to the burial cave with an unlit torch.

He lowers himself down into the cave using the rope and then lights his torch.

He looks around and sees in the cave a large double canoe with its sail unfurled.

On the floor are many bodies, many with his or her knees drawn up to the chest. A rope is wrapped around the deceased person’s legs and placed around the neck. The rope is pulled tight to position the body into a rounded shape. Many of the bodies are wrapped in kapa.

Against the cave walls are many dusty but beautiful Hawaiian feathered cloaks, capes, and helmets, as well as war implements, kapa mats, and standards, long poles decorated at one end with a cluster of feather plumes (kahili).

He also sees many images, some of wood, very much carved, others of red feathers, with wide distended mouths, large rows of shark’s teeth, and glaring pearl-shell eyes.

Dr. Pelham’s jaw drops open as he scans the artifacts.

As his torch begins to sputter, he climbs out of the cave.

INT. UPLAND VILLAGE SANCTUARY – DAY

Dr. Pelham is seeing patients again. The Missionary walks in and Dr. Pelham takes him aside.

DR. PELHAM

I have had an amazing experience. An Old Hawaiian I was seeing as a patient agreed to let me have his bones when he died in exchange for writing down his family’s story.

MISSIONARY

How did that work out?

DR. PELHAM

As you predicted, when he died his family didn’t honor our arrangement and carried his body to a burial cave near here. I found the cave and was amazed that, in addition to bodies, the cave contains the hundreds of Hawaiian artifacts.

MISSIONARY

To the Hawaiians, this is a sacred area. I have heard many stories about the kings and queens who ruled here.

DR. PELHAM

Do the names Pono, Lani, and Kea ring a bell?

MISSIONARY

Yes, indeed.

DR. PELHAM

So, it’s true. It’s all true!

EXT. DR. PELHAM’S HOUSE – NIGHT

Dr. Pelham is awaken by loud shouts and cries.

He walks outside in his night clothes. As he looks toward the plain, tall flames leap out of the hidden burial cave opening.

INT. BURIAL CAVE

The feathered items and wooden images are on fire. Flames lick upward as the image of a tall, wooden Hawaiian god burns.

FADE OUT.

THE END

Golden Harvest-2022-07-12

EXT. COLLEGE CAMPUS – DAY #1#

Establishing shot of the CAMPUS of Junior University, showing STUDENTS at the end of the school year carrying their belongings out to their cars. An outdoor digital LED display board SIGN spells out “Congratulations, graduates!”

SUPERIMPOSE “Golden Harvest”

It’s summer so lots of the Students are dressed in shorts and tee shirts or short skirts and blouses. Some Students are still wearing their graduation gowns. Everyone looks happy.

INT. MISSY’S COLLEGE DORM ROOM – DAY #2#

A compilation of amateur home movie clips plays on the screen of a well-worn LAPTOP computer sitting on a dresser while the opening credits roll.

The first clip shows auburn-haired TODDLER MISSY pretending she is a doctor. She is wearing a toddler-sized white doctor’s coat and listening for heart signs on her doll’s bottom with a concerned look on her face. TWO ADULTS GIGGLE off camera.

The second clip shows MIDDLE SCHOOL MISSY presenting the result of her science fair project. She is standing in front of a poster entitled “How Much Sawdust Can You Put In a Brownie Before People Notice?” The poster has unreadable pages glued to it labeled “Purpose,” “Hypothesis,” and “Results.”

The third clip shows HIGH SCHOOL MISSY participating in a candy striper (hospital volunteer) program at a local hospital. When she tries to deliver a glass of water to a similarly-aged male PATIENT with his leg in a cast that is hanging six inches off his bed, she trips falling on his leg and he yells in pain.

The fourth clip shows MISSY CALLAHAN (21) placing four large envelopes in a mail slot at a post office. Missy is a clumsy dweeb and has a Mr. Magoo look about her. She wears Coke-bottle glasses and has pigtails.

Just before the final clip ends, the camera pulls back and we see Missy’s college dorm room, with moving boxes on her stripped bed, as she packs the last of her belongings, an photograph we can’t quite view in a frame, into a moving box. She has a big smile on her face and her eyes are a little teary.

EXT. COLLEGE PARKING LOT – DAY #3#

Missy just about to move the last moving box from the top of her decade-old compact car into its back seat, when a female Franky (20) approaches and gives her a big hug. Bisexual Franky has short hair, is dressed in light blue nurses’ scrubs, is using a plaid shirt as a jacket, and is tattooed and pierced.

FRANKY

Thanks so much for all the tutoring help.

Missy smiles back but can’t hide her anxiety.

FRANKY

I have my fingers crossed.

MISSY

Me, too.

As Franky walks off, Missy opens the driver’s door of her car and sits in the driver’s seat, with her LAST BOX still sitting on the top of her car. As Missy drives off, her last box slides off the back of her car onto the pavement.

When the box stops sliding across the pavement, we see on top of other items in the box the FRAMED PHOTOGRAPH facing down.

Then, the box disappears under a large truck following Missy’s car.

INT. MISSY’S ADVISOR’S OFFICE – DAY #4#

Missy knocks on the door frame and enters her advisor’s office. Her advisor, PROF. PIERCE, an older college professor in a rumpled suit, is sitting at his desk, his head down, grading papers.

MISSY

Hi, Professor Pierce. Just wanted to say thanks and so long.

PROF. PIERCE

Missy, great to see you. Have a seat.

Missy sits in the chair in front of Prof. Pierce’s desk.

PROF. PIERCE

Glad you stopped by. Congratulations on your excellent GPA, with a double major, no less. Oh, and here is the award certificate for your senior capstone project.

Prof. Pierce hands Missy a senior project award CERTIFICATE. The project title on the certificate is “IS YOUR DNA FOUND IN YOUR PEE?”

PROF. PIERCE

Heard from the school that wait-listed you yet? Wasn’t it Saint Alban?

Missy blushes and shakes her head.

MISSY

Not yet. I’m hoping my technical writing major helps.

PROF. PIERCE

So unfair you had to take your MCAT exam while your Grandmother was sick.

MISSY

She’s better now. (beat) I know you’re busy. I’ll let you know when I hear. Thanks again.

Missy rises and begins to walk out. Dr. Pierce’s head is down again.

PROF. PIERCE

Hang in there!

Missy exits through the door into the hallway.

INT. HALLWAY – DAY #5#

Walking down the hallway, Missy ducks into a room with a SIGN over the door indicating it is the Pre-Med Lounge.

INT. PRE-MED STUDENTS’ LOUNGE – DAY #6#

Missy scans the contents of the VENDING MACHINES to see if something looks edible.

STUDENT

Missy, what are you doing here? You graduated.

MISSY

Picking up my stuff got me hungry.

Missy looks at the vending machines again.

STUDENT

No need to buy anything. A pharmaceutical company rep with an Italian mom just brought in an excellent lasagna. And copies of a journal article about one of their products.

The Student points to the counter. Missy spots the LASAGNA and heads for it.

MISSY

Cool. Thanks.

Missy grabs a NAPKIN and a nearby paper PLATE and scoops a serving of lasagna onto it. She flips through the journal ARTICLE but does not pick up a copy.

MISSY

Looks more like marketing than science.

STUDENT

Yeah. I agree.

The Student glances at his CELL PHONE.

STUDENT

The mail should be in our boxes. Don’t forget to check yours.

INCITING INCIDENT

INT. COLLEGE POST OFFICE LOBBY – DAY #7#

Missy is still wiping the marinara sauce off her chin as she walks toward her eye-level POST OFFICE BOX. She drops the napkin into a trash can and fumbles with her post office box KEY, dropping it a couple of times.

After she puts the key in the lock, she paces back and forth a couple of times, but she feels foolish when ANOTHER BOXHOLDER enters the post office.

The ends of two letter-sized ENVELOPES are visible through the door of her post office. She unlocks and opens the door and pulls out the envelopes.

The return address on the first envelope is Saint Alban! Mary excitedly rips the FIRST LETTER open and reads:

“We regret to inform you….”

Mary stares sadly into the distance.

The return address on the second envelope is that of the college financial office.

Missy opens the SECOND LETTER and reads:

“Congratulations College Graduate!

This is a reminder that repayment

of your $37,172 student loan must begin

within a six-month grace period

that starts on the date of this letter.”

Missy crumples the envelopes and second letter into a ball and throws the ball into a nearby recycling container. She slumps down to a swatting position holding the rejection letter.

When a CLASSMATE enters the lobby, Missy quickly stands, looks away, and wipes her nose.

INT. CALLAHAN’S KITCHEN – EVENING #8#

Missy is teary as she enters the kitchen and approaches her grandmother, STELLA (70). Stella is wearing a cancer head SCARF. They hug. Missy sobs and Stella knows the cause.

STELLA

I’m so sorry, honey.

MISSY

Gran, all I want to do is help sick people. (sob) Maybe I should figure another way.

STELLA

We’re here for you. Let us know how we can help.

MISSY

I guess I’d better tell Papa.

Stella gives Missy a kiss on the cheek as they disengage.

INT. CALLAHAN’S DEN – CONTINUOUS #9#

Missy walks into the den. Her grandfather, JOE (72) is sitting in a reclining chair, watching a streaming soccer game on a TV. There is movie POSTER for the movie Galaxy Quest on the wall.

MISSY

Hi, Papa.

Joe pauses the video, turns to look at Missy, and beams at her.

JOE

I was worried about your long drive. (beat) What’s up, honey?

Missy tears up again.

MISSY

Just found out I was rejected by my backup med school.

Joe gets up and hugs Missy.

JOE

Oh, honey. I’m so sorry.

MISSY

Maybe it’s for the best. Maybe I should just move on with my life.

Joe puts his hands on her shoulders.

JOE

That’s not the Missy Callahan I know. What do we say around here?

Missy smiles through her tears.

MISSY

“Never give up! Never surrender!”

Grandfather smiles and drops his hands to hold hers.

JOE

I know you’ll figure out what to do. I just wish we could help more with money, but with our doctors’ bills, that’s just not in the cards.

Missy wipes her eyes.

MISSY

You’re right! I’ll make an appointment with my adviser.

INT. MISSY’S ADVISOR’S OFFICE – DAY #10#

Missy knocks on the door frame of her Advisor’s office. Prof. Pierce is sitting at his desk. He raises his head and motions for her to come in.

Missy walks over to the chair in front of his desk and slumps down into it. She looks unhappy.

PROF. PIERCE

Didn’t make it into St. Albans?

MISSY

Yes. What should I do now?

Prof. Pierce smiles with a pained look.

PROF. PIERCE

I assume you want to reapply?

MISSY

Yes, I do.

PROF. PIERCE

Well, one thing you can do is to retake your MCAT exam. So, you will need to prepare for that.

Missy looks a little more positive.

MISSY

OK. I’ll do that.

PROF. PIERCE

Another thing is to shadow a doctor, maybe even become a medical scribe to record what the doctor wants to include in the patient’s medical record. You can get paid for scribe work.

Missy smiles.

MISSY

I could use the money. My student loan is coming due.

PROF. PIERCE

OK. You’ve got a plan. Give me a few days to check with local doctors.

MISSY

Thanks.

Missy smiles and leaves.

INT. MISSY’S ADVISOR’S LAB #11#

Missy visits her boyfriend, LANCE (21) to commiserate.

MISSY

How’s it going?

Lance does not pause working with a PIPETTE and does not look up.

LANCE

Almost finished. My last DNA amplification run did not work out.

He finishes and looks up.

Missy tears up a little.

MISSY

I just learned my wait-listed med school application was rejected.

Lance appears not to be very concerned, and maybe even a little relieved.

BOYFRIEND

Sorry about that. What are you going to do now?

MISSY

My advisor thinks I should retake the MCAT and buff up my application by shadowing a famous doc.

LANCE

Sounds like a plan.

Lance looks at his CELL PHONE.

LANCE

Oh, I have a meeting about my first year in med school.

Lance is cool toward Missy.

MISSY

See you later.

They both leave.

INT. PRE-MED LOUNGE – DAY #12#

Looking for comfort food again, Missy enters the Pre-Med Lounge to find Franky there. Missy slumps down in a chair at Franky’s table.

FRANKY

I heard. How are you doing?

MISSY

I’m bummed. I’m thinking about retaking the MCAT and doing some scribe work.

Franky beams at her.

FRANKY

If you stay in town, share my apartment. I have an extra bedroom.

MISSY

Thanks, but I’m going to be short of cash.

FRANKY

It’s the least I can do.

MISSY

Do you need any tutoring?

FRANKY

Yes! I’ll be taking biochem.

Missy smiles.

MISSY

Then, I’ll stay with you if I get the hospital job.

INT. HOSPITAL WARD – DAY #13#

DR. SIMON VICTOR SMAUG, late 60’s, heavyset, with a mop of dyed-blond hair and a goatee, is dressed in light blue scrubs with a scrubs cap. He walks out of one of his patient’s hospital rooms into a hallway that is bustling with MEDICAL WORKERS. Behind him is his CURRENT SCRIBE pushing her workstation on wheels (WOW) ahead of her. She is wearing white scrubs decorated with thick, concentric red circles.

Dr. Smaug is obviously angry. He shuts the door of the hospital room and his red face makes it clear he is livid. He turns to his Current Scribe.

DR. SMAUG

You contradicted me in there! You, a wet-behind-the-ears scribe, contradicted me in front of a patient! I am a medical genius and you are nothing! You’re fired as of right now. Don’t expect a letter of recommendation.

Dr. Smaug thunders off down the hallway, leaving Current Scribe shocked, embarrassed, and sobbing.

On-looking Medical Workers pause, some with knowing looks of pity at the Current Scribe, and then continue their work.

INT. DR. SMAUG’S OFFICE – DAY #14#

Dr. Smaug storms into his office and sits behind his desk. He is followed closely by his head nurse and wife, NURSE EMILY SMAUG (50s). Nurse Smaug is a tall, thin brunette who is still quite a looker. She is wearing tailored, hunter-green nursing scrubs and a pillbox nurse’s cap with a red band.

NURSE SMAUG

I’m happy you finally fired that idiot.

DR. SMAUG

I could not believe her audacity!

As they talk, the HOSPITAL ADMINISTRATOR walks in.

HOSPITAL ADMINISTRATOR

Jesus! Not again. What happened?

DR. SMAUG

I will not be disrespected in front of my patients!

HOSPITAL ADMINISTRATOR

Had you given her warnings about that behavior?

DR. SMAUG

No and I don’t care. She made fun of me and I will not allow it.

NURSE SMAUG

I’ve been reviewing her work and have had to make many corrections. She’s not too bright. Her firing was long overdue.

The Hospital Administrator rolls his eyes and leaves the room.

INT. PRE-MED STUDENTS’ LOUNGE – DAY #15#

Sitting in the Pre-Med Student’s Lounge, Missy searches for information on Dr. Smaug’s background and resume on her laptop.

She finds out he is a prominent OB-GYN doctor who has authored many publications.

MISSY

Gee, over 250 publications.

INT. HOSPITAL PHYSICIANS’ LOUNGE – DAY #16#

Missy walks into the Physicians’ Lounge and pauses as she sees Dr. Smaug looking at himself in a mirror hanging on the wall, stroking his goatee. His face is stern, like he is posing for a photograph. He is dressed in light blue surgeon’s scrubs with a scrubs cap.

Dr. Smaug motions for Missy to approach. They shake hands and sit down across from one another at a small table. There is a simple poster on the wall containing the words, in calligraphy: “Thou shalt. Thou shalt not.”

When a RESIDENT attempts to sit join them at the table, Dr. Smaug waves him away dismissively.

DR. SMAUG

So, you’re interested in shadowing me. Your resume looks great, especially the technical writing aspect.

MISSY

Yes, I’m very interested. Prof. Pierce thinks it will help my medical school application.

DR. SMAUG

I agree. Understanding the nature of the jobs doctors perform is critical. And, too many women don’t like the job after going through medical school.

Nurse Emily Smaug enters the room and walks up to the table. Dr. Smaug rises and introduces his wife.

DR. SMAUG

Ms. Callahan, this is my wife, Emily. She’s also my head nurse.

As he speaks, Missy rises and offers her hand to Nurse Smaug, but Nurse Smaug ignores the gesture.

MISSY

Good to meet you. I’m looking forward to learning more about Dr. Smaug’s practice.

Nurse Smaug’s eyes dart toward her husband and then back to Missy. Emily is jealous.

NURSE SMAUG

(to Missy)

I’m sure you will find it interesting.

(to Dr. Smaug)

Just got a call from the clinic. You’re needed there.

DR. SMAUG

Missy, I’ve arranged for you to be trained as a paid medical scribe. Please check in with the hospital human resources office for the details.

Missy smiles and nods.

DR. SMAUG

We’d better take off. I am looking forward to working with you.

The Smaugs leave the room.

INT. CALLAHAN’S KITCHEN – DAY #17#

Missy visits her grandparents’ home. While eating dinner with them, Missy muses about her options.

MISSY’S GRANDMOTHER

Have some more chicken, honey.

Missy’s Grandmother passes the fried chicken platter to Missy.

MISSY

Thanks, but I am stuffed.

Missy searches for a place on the dining table to put the platter down.

MISSY’S GRANDFATHER

I can help with that.

Missy passes the platter to him with a smile and turns to her Grandmother.

MISSY

Gran, I’m thinking about following my boyfriend to his med school. What do you think?

MISSY’S GRANDMOTHER

I hope you don’t, Missy. There is a good chance you will be accepted yourself if you try again.

MISSY’S GRANDFATHER

I agree. Give med school another try.

Missy nods, deep in thought.

MISSY

I’m leaning that way.

INT. MISSY’S BEDROOM – NIGHT #18#

Missy is in bed, about to turn off her reading light. She picks up the Framed Photograph on her nightstand and looks at it. It’s a picture of Toddler Missy standing between her deceased, auburn-haired PARENTS, holding their hands.

MISSY

Mom and Dad, what should I do?

Missy reaches over and turns out her reading light.

INT. MISSY’S ADVISOR’S OFFICE – DAY #19#

Missy stops by her Advisor’s office. Prof. Pierce is sitting behind his desk, as usual. Missy knocks and he waves her in.

MISSY

I won’t sit. I just wanted to thank you for the referral to Dr. Smaug. He looks like he could help me.

PROF. PIERCE

Glad to be able to help. Dr. Smaug can be self important, but I think you can handle him.

MISSY

I’ll let you know what happens. Thanks again.

Missy takes her leave.

INT. PRE-MED LOUNGE – DAY #20#

Missy and Franky are sitting together at a table when Missy’s boyfriend, Lance, enters the room. Franky is facing toward the door, sees Lance enter, and moves to another table. Missy turns to Lance.

MISSY

Hi. Are you making progress?

LANCE

I’m finished and ready to explore my new neighborhood. How are you?

MISSY

I’m fine. I’ve been meaning to talk with you. I was wondering if I could check out your new digs.

Boyfriend looks guilty.

MISSY

What’s the matter?

LANCE

Well, I’ve been meaning to talk with you, too.

Lance looks at the floor.

LANCE

I was thinking about our situation and I think we should start seeing other people.

MISSY

Other people?

Missy’s eyes start to glisten.

BOYFRIEND

It’s all my fault. I think I’m going to be too busy to have a long distance relationship.

MISSY

Oh. (beat) I understand.

LANCE

I hoped you would. And I wish you all the best. (beat) Well, I need to take off.

Missy looks dejected and is tearing up.

MISSY

See you.

Franky has overheard the conversation. She joins Missy as Lance leaves the room.

FRANKY

What a dick!

Missy laughs through her tears.

MISSY

Yeah. I guess I should’ve seen that coming. Well, that settles it. You have a new roommate.

FRANKY

Let’s go to the cafeteria.

Missy smiles and nods.

INT. SCHOOL CAFETERIA – DAY #21#

Missy and Franky are sitting together. STUDENTS eat at tables around them. Missy and Franky are each working on a pint container of Ben and Jerry’s ice cream. Missy’s is Chocolate Therapy(R) and Franky’s is Banana Split(R).

FRANKY

He was not good enough. You can do better.

Missy takes another bite.

MISSY

You’re right. It’s still a bummer.

FRANKY

What have you decided about the summer job offer?

MISSY

I’m taking Dr. Smaug’s offer.

Missy smiles.

MISSY

And yours. When can I move in?

Franky smiles, too.

INT. HOSPITAL HR DEPARTMENT – DAY #22#

A nervous Missy reports to the hospital HR department to become an employee. She reads and signs paperwork and is handed an EMPLOYEES’ MANUAL.

INT. FRIEND’S APARTMENT – EVENING #23#

Missy carries the last box of her belongings into her bedroom in Franky’s apartment and sits on her bed. Franky knocks lightly and walks in.

FRANKY

I guess I should warn you that Dr. Smaug is a pompous bully. But, you’ve met him, so I guess you know.

MISSY

That’s what I gathered. Don’t worry. It’s just for a summer. I can cope.

FRANKY

You let me know if it ever gets to be too much. Not all doctors really want to help other people.

MISSY

I will.

Missy puts the Framed Photograph on her dresser.

INT. HOSPITAL WARD – DAY #24#

Missy approaches Nurse Smaug who is sitting at a nursing station. Missy smiles.

MISSY

Good morning!

Nurse Smaug is now a little cool toward Missy.

NURSE SMAUG

Oh, hello. Good to see you.

MISSY

Just wanted to check in before I started scribe training. Is Dr. Smaug around?

Nurse Smaug stands up and looks down the hall.

NURSE SMAUG

Yes, he’s down the hall talking to a doctor.

MISSY

Thanks.

Missy sees Dr. Smaug and wanders down the hall. When she is about to reach him, she waits for him to finish his conversation with the doctor.

DR. SMAUG

I don’t care what you were told. I am to be called Dr. Smaug, not Simon. Got that?

YOUNG DOCTOR

Yes, Dr. Smaug, I understand.

When Dr. Smaug turns around in a huff, he sees Missy and smiles.

MISSY

Dr. Smaug. Just wanted to let you know I’m starting scribe training today.

DR. SMAUG

Excellent. Looking forward to working with you.

Dr. Smaug walks away.

INT. HOSPITAL SCRIBE TRAINING CENTER – DAY #25#

BEGIN MEDICAL SCRIBE TRAINING MONTAGE

–Missy sits with other TRAINEES through a medical anatomy class taught by a TRAINER. Missy has her chin in her palm. She already knows this stuff.

–Missy participates in a computerized medical record system users’ class with other Trainees. Each computer, monitor, and keyboard is on a mobile platform (called a workstation on wheels or WOW) so it can be wheeled into a patient’s room. Missy discovers she made a mistaken entry, corrects it, and smiles.

–Missy undergoes floor training, using the WOW to create a real-time medical record of an actual PATIENT for his DOCTOR in the Patient’s hospital room. After they leave the room, the Doctor smiles and gives Missy a thumbs up.

–Missy licks the end of her #2 pencil during a quiz on medical terminology, as she fills in the ovals on a paper answer sheet. Some of the other Trainees are nervous, but not Missy.

–Missy is handed a paycheck by the Trainer and sees she is earning $12 per hour. She is happy to have an income and puts the check in her pocket.

END MEDICAL SCRIBE TRAINING MONTAGE

INT. FIRST PATIENT’S HOSPITAL ROOM – DAY #26#

Missy follows Dr. Smaug into the hospital room of LAURA (23), one of his pregnant patients, who is lying in a hospital bed and is hooked up to a BLOOD PRESSURE MONITORING SYSTEM. Missy is pushing the WOW ahead of her.

DR. SMAUG

Laura, how are you feeling today?

LAURA

I’m fine.

DR. SMAUG

Let’s check your heart signs.

Dr. Smaug puts on his stethoscope and listens to the four primary areas: left and right of the sternum at the level of the 2nd rib, left of the sternum at the 4th rib, and on the left nipple line at the level of the 5th rib. He looks at the Monitoring System.

DR. SMAUG

With your high blood pressure, I think you would be better off attending my pregnancy clinic. My nurse will visit you and explain the process.

LAURA

Thanks, Dr. Smaug.

Dr. Smaug leaves.

INT. SECOND PATIENT’S HOSPITAL ROOM – DAY #27#

Missy follows Dr. Smaug into the room of another patient, ANN. This patient is also a pregnant Millennial.

DR. SMAUG

Laura, how are you feeling today?

ANN

I’m a little scared.

DR. SMAUG

Let’s check your heart signs.

Dr. Smaug puts on his stethoscope and listens to the four primary areas: left and right of the sternum at the level of the 2nd rib, left of the sternum at the 4th rib, and on the left nipple line at the level of the 5th rib. He looks at the Monitoring System.

DR. SMAUG

With your high blood pressure, I think you would be better off attending my pregnancy clinic. My nurse will visit you and explain the process.

ANN

OK. Thanks, Dr. Smaug.

DR. Smaug leaves.

INT. DR. SMAUG’S OFFICE – DAY #28#

Dr. Smaug likes Missy’s work and offers her a job coordinating work on some professional paper manuscripts. He introduces her to how his articles are written initially by someone else.

Missy reports to Dr. Smaug’s office.

MISSY

Dr. Smaug, I heard you wanted to talk.

DR. SMAUG

Yes, I do. Have a seat.

Missy sits in a chair.

DR. SMAUG

I wanted to let you know that you are doing a great job. Your writing is impressive.

Missy blushes.

MISSY

Thanks.

DR. SMAUG

I would like to hire you to help me with editing some of my publications. Your hourly wage would be double what you make here. How does that sound?

MISSY

Sounds interesting. What sort of publications?

DR. SMAUG

I work with a medical communications firm to produce medical journal articles about hormone replacement therapy. Most of them are review articles.

MISSY

OK. What would my role be?

DR. SMAUG

You would help me liaison with the medical communications firm, CasperWrite, and act as my editor.

Missy smiles.

MISSY

When can I start?

INT. GHOSTWRITING COMPANY OFFICE – DAY #29#

Missy walks into the lobby and sees the company name, CasperWrite, on the wall behind the RECEPTIONIST, a homely woman in her 30s.

MISSY

Hi, I’m Missy Callahan. I have a 10 o’clock appointment with Will Lumbar.

RECEPTIONIST

I’ll let him know you are here.

Missy is met in the lobby by the office manager, WILL LUMBAR, PhD, a slightly-smarmy, middle-aged man.

WILL LUMBAR

Miss Callahan, welcome. I’m the manager of this branch office of CasperWrite.

Missy offers her hand to Will who shakes it limply.

MISSY

Thanks. Good to meet you.

WILL LUMBAR

Our team is looking forward to working with you. Follow me and I’ll show you where you can drop off your stuff and introduce some of the team to you.

Missy nods and follows him out of the lobby through a door that is locked but buzzes when the Receptionist unlocks it using a button under her desk.

INT. DARYL’S OFFICE – DAY #30#

Will and Missy approach the closed door of the office of the first team member to be introduced, DARYL (40s). Will tries the doorknob unsuccessfully and then knocks on the door.

WILL LUMBAR

Daryl, open your door. It’s me.

DARYL

Who’s there?

WILL LUMBAR

Daryl, it’s me, Will. I want to introduce you to Dr. Smaug’s new publication coordinator.

DARYL

How do you know she works for Dr. Smaug?

WILL LUMBAR

He called me and told me so.

DARYL

OK.

Daryl unlocks the door and opens it He looks at Missy, unsmiling.

DARYL

Sorry. Someone has been moving the books in my bookcase.

Missy extends her hand. Daryl shakes it and then wipes his hand with a moist towelette.

WILL LUMBAR

Daryl meet Missy. Missy meet Daryl. Missy, Daryl works on publications about clinical trial results.

DARYL

Good to meet you. I’m on a deadline, but we can talk later.

Missy smiles and nods and Daryl closes his door again.

WILL LUMBAR

And across the hall is Dan Wand’s office.

Missy and Will exit.

INT. DAN’S OFFICE – CONTINUOUS #31#

Will knocks on the door.

DAN WAND

Come on in.

Will opens the door and he and Missy walk in to meet DAN WAND, a 30-something, handsome guy who thinks much too highly of himself.

WILL LUMBAR

Dan, this is Missy Callahan. She is Dr. Smaug’s new publication coordinator.

Dan thrusts out his hand and shakes Missy’s hand while glancing at her clothed breasts.

DAN WAND

Good to meet you. I’m the best ghostwriter here, so if you ever have any questions, I’m your man.

MISSY

Thanks for the offer, Dan.

Dan can’t think of anything else to say.

WILL LUMBAR

Thanks, Dan. See you at the lunch seminar.

Missy and Will exit.

INT. ZETH’S OFFICE #32#

Zeth’s door is open, so Will knocks on the door frame. ZETH STONE (23) turns around from his desk, stands, and smiles.

ZETH

Come on in.

There is movie poster for Galaxy Quest on the wall.

WILL LUMBAR

Zeth, this is Missy Callahan. She is Dr. Smaug’s new publication coordinator.

Zeth offers his hand to Missy and she shakes it.

ZETH

Welcome to the jungle.

WILL LUMBAR

Zeth helps our clients who are busy medical doctors write their memoirs.

MISSY

Good to meet you. You must learn a lot about your co-authors.

ZETH

That I do. I hope to see you around.

Missy smiles.

WILL LUMBAR

You will. See you at the lunch seminar.

Missy and Will exit.

INT. COMPANY CONFERENCE ROOM – DAY #33#

Will ushers Missy into the company conference room which has a PODIUM and CHAIRS set out in rows with a TABLE containing SANDWICH BAGS and SODAS situated along the side of the room. Several OTHER EMPLOYEES are sitting in the chairs munching on sandwiches and conversing with one another.

WILL LUMBAR

(to Missy)

The Company provides sandwiches for the seminars. Grab one.

Missy and Will pick out a labeled Sandwich Bag and a Soda and sit at the back of the room. KELLY, a no-nonsense, 30-something, striking blond, walks into the room and stands at the podium organizing her notes.

WILL LUMBAR

(to Missy)

That’s Kelly, our messaging manager.

Missy nods.

KELLY

Let’s get started.

Kelly waits for the conversations to stop.

KELLY

Thanks for attending this lunchtime seminar. As usual, my talk is entitled “I’m Just Saying.” Today, I hope to show you that we are missing some opportunities to increase the market share of our clients’ hormone therapy products.

DAN WAND

You go, girl!

Kelly gives Dan a Pained look.

KELLY

I want you to think about other ways for the content we ghostwrite to emphasize how widespread and severe menopause conditions are, praise the benefits of our clients’ hormone therapy drugs, ridicule competing drugs and those that promote them, and reassure our target audience (doctors and nurse practitioners) that adverse side effects of our clients’ drugs are rare and manageable, or might be caused by something else.

As Kelly drones on, Missy looks a little uncomfortable with what she is hearing.

INT. VISITING GUEST AUTHOR’S OFFICE – DAY #34#

Missy is sitting in the visiting guest author’s office editing one of the draft ghostwritten medical journal manuscripts for which Dr. Smaug will be a named author. The door is open so Seth knocks on the door frame.

SETH

How are things going?

Missy looks up and smiles.

MISSY

Great. I am starting to notice that Dr. Smaug’s manuscripts are well written, but the science is a little shaky.

SETH

Welcome to the world of ghostwriting where the “piper” who funds the preparation of the manuscript “calls the tune.”

MISSY

What do you mean?

SETH

It will become clear to you that ghostwritten manuscripts are marketing publications, not scientific publications.

MISSY

Who pays for them?

SETH

Well, it depends. The doctors’ memoirs I ghostwrite are paid for by the doctors and are designed to “sell” the doctors’ services by lauding their education and experience. Dr. Smaug’s publications “sell” menopausal hormone therapy and are paid for the pharmaceutical companies that manufacture and market the drugs.

Missy is a little disappointed

MISSY

Oh, now I understand.

SETH

Sorry to sound so cynical, but I thought you ought to know.

MISSY

How did you get interested in ghostwriting?

SETH

Well, long story short, after I got my M.D., I didn’t get a residency match and ran out of money. So, I can do this sort of job but I can’t practice medicine.

MISSY

Sorry to hear that. Are you going to try again?

SETH

Maybe, but right now I am enjoying what I’m doing and get to add a lot of famous doctors to my professional network.

MISSY

Oh.

SETH

Well, see you around.

Seth exits.

INT. COMPANY CONFERENCE ROOM – DAY #35#

Missy meets with Daryl to discuss the draft article she is editing. Missy is seated at a conference table when Daryl enters.

MISSY

Daryl, good to see you. Thanks for meeting with me.

Daryl makes sure they are alone by opening the door of a supplies closet and looking in. He sits down on the other side of the conference table.

DARYL

No problem.

MISSY

My first question is why is there so much repetition in the draft you wrote?

Daryl smiles.

DARYL

That’s easy. Research has shown that if you repeat an idea three to five times, then people will be more likely to believe it.

Missy nods.

DARYL

So, we tell ’em what we will tell ’em. Then we tell ’em. Then we tell ’em what we told them. Repetition leads to familiarity and familiarity leads to acceptance.

MISSY

I get it. Why do you emphasize that OB-GYN docs who serve post menopausal women are being denied the opportunity to prescribe hormone therapy?

Daryl nods.

DARYL

That’s where the psychological principle of reactance comes in. If you convince readers that they are losing a freedom, then the reader is motivated to exercise or regain that freedom, whether it is a good idea on not. It triggers the “you’re not the boss of me” reaction.

MISSY

I see. Why does the manuscript argue that the Women’s Health Initiative is flawed?

Daryl smiles.

DARYL

The Women’s Health Initiative was a very large randomized clinical trial that studied whether menopausal hormone therapy is a good idea. The WHI, as it is known, found that hormone therapy increased the incidence of a number of diseases that hormone therapy was originally thought to prevent. But, the WHI did have limitations and the manuscript points them out.

Missy is starting to understand how ghostwriting works.

MISSY

So, the manuscript wants readers to mistrust the WHI and it findings.

DARYL

You got it. Any more questions? I have to bug out.

MISSY

No, I’m good. I understand now.

INT. MANAGER’S OFFICE – DAY #36#

Missy enters Will Lumbar’s office.

WILL LUMBAR

Good morning. How can I help?

Missy screws up her courage.

MISSY

Thanks, Will. As I review the manuscript Daryl drafted for Dr. Smaug, I noted that it has a promotional tone. That is, the manuscript sounds like it is encouraging the use of hormone therapy. Other papers in the literature do not do that.

Will steeples his fingers.

WILL LUMBAR

That is a very astute observation. In fact, the manuscript is promotional in tone.

MISSY

Why is that?

WILL LUMBAR

It’s because Dr. Smaug firmly believes that the benefits of hormone therapy far outweigh its risks and that older women are being inappropriately discouraged from using it by naysayers out there.

MISSY

I understand.

WILL LUMBAR

Dr. Smaug’s journal publications are read by women’s doctors and he wants to motivate those doctors to do what’s right by their patients. Hence, the promotional tone.

MISSY

Got it. Thanks, I’ll get back to work.

Missy exits.

INT. COMPANY LUNCHROOM – DAY #37#

Missy is pouring herself another cup of COFFEE when Dan Wand walks in.

DAN WAND

Hi there good looking.

Missy smiles and tries to exit.

DAN WAND

How about me treating you to lunch some day. Just to get acquainted.

MISSY

Thanks, Dan, but I am too busy to do much socializing these days.

DAN WAND

Well, I’ll keep trying.

Dan smiles and leaves.

INT. COMPANY LIBRARY – DAY #38#

Missy is sitting in the company library reading medical journals when Seth walks in.

SETH

Doing some homework?

Missy looks up from a stack of journals and smiles.

MISSY

Just reading some of the references that Daryl cited in the manuscript I’m editing.

As Seth looks for a journal on the shelves, he notes.

SETH

I’m impressed. I’m pretty sure Dr. Smaug’s previous publications coordinator did not read references. My impression is she just looked for typos.

Missy stops reading.

MISSY

I didn’t know that medical journal manuscripts are used to present arguments to support medical opinions. I thought they were just supposed to present facts.

Seth smiles as he leaves the room with the journal he was looking for.

SETH

Welcome to the world of medical article ghostwriting!

INT. DR. SMAUG’S OFFICE – DAY #39#

Missy knocks on Dr. Smaug’s office door.

DR. SMAUG

Come in.

Missy enters the office.

MISSY

Good morning, Dr. Smaug.

DR. SMAUG

Have a seat. I think I have another opportunity for you.

Missy sits.

DR. SMAUG

I thought you might enjoy helping out at my private health clinic for post-menopausal women. It’s called the Quality of Life Clinic. We’re a little short-staffed this month.

MISSY

Sounds interesting.

DR. SMAUG

You would meet older women who rely on hormone replacement therapy to improve their quality of life. The pay would be the same as your editing work.

MISSY

I understand you are a proponent of menopausal hormone therapy.

DR. SMAUG

I definitely am. Talking to my patients, you will see that I am not alone in that belief.

MISSY

Then, sure, when should I start?

Dr. Smaug rises to leave.

DR. SMAUG

Great! How about first thing next Monday. Ask my wife for the directions.

MISSY

See you then.

Missy follows Dr. Smaug into the hall.

MIDPOINT

INT. QOL CLINIC LOBBY – DAY #40#

When Missy enters the QOL Clinic, she is met by Nurse Smaug. A CLINIC RECEPTIONIST is sitting at a reception counter.

NURSE SMAUG

Good morning.

MISSY

Thanks. How can I help?

NURSE SMAUG

You will be sitting with our older patients for 10 minutes or so after they receive their injections. Just to make sure there are no adverse reactions. If any problems arise, let me know.

MISSY

OK, I can handle that.

NURSE SMAUG

The injections occur every four weeks. We need to be on the lookout for sudden, bad headaches; vomiting; speech problems; dizziness or fainting; sudden complete or partial loss of vision; weakness or numbness of an arm or a leg; bad chest pain; coughing up blood; sudden shortness of breath; or difficulty thinking clearly.

MISSY

Will do.

NURSE SMAUG

First, I want you to meet our lab director.

Missy follows Nurse Smaug through an internal door into the clinic.

INT. QOL CLINIC LUNCHROOM – DAY #41#

Nurse Smaug and Missy enter the QOL Clinic lunchroom. Dr. Smaug’s laboratory director, E.G. Ore, who is stooped and limps, is grabbing COFFEE and taking a break.

NURSE SMAUG

E.G., I want you to meet Missy who will be helping monitor patients after they receive their injections.

E.G. offers his hand to Missy and they shake.

E.G. ORE

Welcome to QOL Clinic.

MISSY

So, you prepare the injections?

E.G. looks at Nurse Smaug, then at Missy.

E.G. ORE

I prepare them and I give them.

INT. ZETH’S PLACE – EVENING #42#

INT. QOL LUNCHROOM – DAY #43#

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